Shush . . .

December 12, 2010
By its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.


Summary:

Sarah, a southern girl that lost her father when she was young, is now a senior in high school. She's excited for the school year, but she's terrified at the same time. She has a bad feeling about this year.
Her fears are confirmed when the new kid, Dean, appears in her classes. He makes her stomach churn, but those aren't the only feelings she has for him.
When Sarah's former boyfriend, Scott, keeps appearing, memories return from the summer before. Unpleasant memories. She hasn't spoken to anyone about that night. Not even her best friends. But she might have to tell someone if she wants to stay safe.


Kelcey L.

Shush . . .


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Deeloves said...
on May. 7 2013 at 2:54 pm
Deeloves, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
no one ever stays when they make you change to keep them... so why should i try..?

OMG....!!! you have to keep writing the story.... i couldnt look away....!

on Oct. 13 2012 at 3:32 am
Hi, THIS IS A GREAT STORY. AT first it sorta sounded like Twilight with the carrying her to the nurse's office and debates about who to drive and stuff. The rest was cool. Thanks for sharing!

on Oct. 1 2012 at 8:51 am
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

I'm planning on it, I just have to figure out a good cliff hanger for this book :) Thanks for the great comment!

poemluv BRONZE said...
on Sep. 18 2012 at 11:53 am
poemluv BRONZE, Coolidge, Arizona
2 articles 4 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the world shout 'give up' hope whipers 'try it one more time'"

I love it! The immagery is PERFECT, and The plot is so fantastic and beautiful!!!! You should make a sequel :3

on May. 11 2012 at 1:51 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks! I'll be sure to do my editing soon :)

on May. 11 2012 at 1:43 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks !!!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 3:00 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

love it!

can't wait to read more!

your style is awesome and so are the characters- but there are a few grammar errors and stuff that need to be checked. but otherwise it's great :)


on Feb. 15 2012 at 8:42 pm
_alannahurt SILVER, Snyder, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
A blank piece of paper is God’s way of telling us how hard it to be God.
– Sidney Sheldon

You need to finish it!!!!! Its like, the best book ever!!!! I wanna read part 2!!!

on Feb. 11 2012 at 10:58 pm
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's

I cant wait to read more

on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:25 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

I'm not done with it yet, I'm just too lazy to finish it right now. I just wanted to post what I have done to get people's opinions. But thanks!

on Jan. 1 2012 at 1:21 pm
DawningCelesta, ., Ohio
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Thanks for writing! I really liked the plot line, and the mysterious aspects that you were able to resolve in the end. It's hard to come to a conclusion with a short book, but you managed it very well (: I'm trying to incorporate some of these same themes in mine; it's not done yet, so if you have any suggestions they would be much appreciated!

on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:09 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks!!(:

on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:08 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you !!

on Dec. 9 2011 at 4:24 pm
Cbsiegel BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
A woman whose smile is open and whose expression is glad has a kind of beauty no matter what she wears.
Anne Roiphe

That's the best book ever!

 


on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:30 pm
C.L.Erins BRONZE, Nunn, Colorado
1 article 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
The past is like a pen. You can always cross it out, but you can never erase it. ( unless you have one of those special erasable pens and in that case... well you are lucky)

Oh my gosh this is amazing!!! definelely one of the best things i have ever read!!! you're an amazing writer!

on Oct. 30 2011 at 6:21 pm
blacksummer2014 SILVER, Brookfield, Wisconsin
7 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"'I love you all; except you, Draco, I can't f****** stand you'"-- Harry from A Very Potter Musical

"Granger! Oh I thought you were a boggart!!!" -Albus Dumbledore from A Very Potter Musical

OMFG THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! seriously. It. Rocked. Bottom. Line.

LittleMiss said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 2:41 pm
LittleMiss, Jackson, Mississippi
0 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pen is mightier than the sword

could you read over my piece i would love your opinion

on Oct. 13 2011 at 7:16 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you. (:

LittleMiss said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:02 pm
LittleMiss, Jackson, Mississippi
0 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pen is mightier than the sword

I love this, the way your word things..incredible plus I love guardian angels so i like how you wove that into this keep writing your amazing

on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:54 pm
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.

Haha no problem :)


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