The Summer I Found Myself

December 2, 2010
By Anonymous

Summary:

We walked up the boardwalk and a few guys were coming down our way. There were three of them and they were our age, maybe a little bit older. When we got ready to pass them one of them stopped smiling and asked “Did it hurt?” I looked at him confused and asked “Did what hurt?”

“When you fell from heaven?” My face blushed immediately and Shelly started laughing so hard that I couldn’t help but join in.

“I’m Ayden, and this Jason and Carson.” The guy with the pickup like said.

Shelly stepped forward and introduced us.

“Where are you headed?” Ayden asked.

“To the restaurant down there.” I replied.

“Well, we were heading up to the beach, maybe we will see you around?” he smiled down at me and I replied “Yea, sure.”


Anonymous

The Summer I Found Myself


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Pink<3 said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 4:30 pm
Wow!This book is really good!You should finish it!I was up till 3 last night because it was so interestring!!!

on Oct. 18 2012 at 2:48 pm
CreativeWriter2015 SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Be kind. Be smart. Be important." - The Help
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game." -A Cinderella Story

I loved this story, it was so interesting!! You should write more!!

on Jun. 21 2012 at 2:20 pm
Emoizwatwer BRONZE, Tacoma, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Trying to forget a person you love.... is like trying to remember someone you never met.
Never regret anything because at one time it was exactly what you wanted.

omg i could not stop reading this piece it was beautiful i can tell you would make an awesome writer it was an amazing story love it though you should make it longer

on May. 31 2012 at 4:34 pm
DanielleSK BRONZE, Toronto, Other
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think a lot, but I don't say much."- Anne Frank

This is a nice story! It has a good message, too. If you made this longer, I think it could definitely be published. Great job (:

on May. 27 2012 at 9:52 pm
BluBirdWriter13, Nowhere, Kentucky
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You like one direction too, they're so amazing.

on Apr. 10 2012 at 4:33 am
I suppose it's an okay book. Maybe it's just not my type. I never had a soft spot for romance. But I think this could be improved a lot more by elaborating on several parts. Like some of the incidents Macy went through for an example. A bit about Stelly, perhaps? A bit more detail would make the plot a lot tighter too. And finally, talk more about the part where Macy found herself. Right an epilogue after she found herself, maybe? 

on Apr. 4 2012 at 3:26 am
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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Awesome! What you are trying to say is something we should consider when trying to feel confortable about ourselves doing things that actually do any good to us. I love the love part! You should try to get it published.

on Mar. 19 2012 at 2:05 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

Amazing book! Loved every minute of it! Fix up the grammar errors and spelling mistakes and you're on the way to having a great story on your hands! Keep up the good work!

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on Jan. 22 2012 at 11:37 am
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
10 articles 4 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge a Girl by Her Cover

This is book is awsome! I propose that you work on a re-pwrite and try to getit puplished

on Jan. 1 2012 at 3:57 pm
selahoverrated GOLD, Mt Sidney, Virginia
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me too i love the hidden message in them that sometimes you have to figure out yourself

on Dec. 29 2011 at 1:08 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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I love this book! Reading it made me feel really excited :) please check out my poem!

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:18 pm
BeczLuvzYew BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life like there is no tomorrow, with endless laughs, and love as deep as the ocean

i LOVE her books

on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:39 pm
countrygirl28 GOLD, Colleyville, Texas
15 articles 137 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Expose yourself to your deepest fear. After that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free." -Jim Morrison
"Don't think or judge. Just listen." -Sarah Dessen

I really, really loved the book, but there were a LOT of grammar issues. Other than that, it was excellent!!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:27 pm
countrygirl28 GOLD, Colleyville, Texas
15 articles 137 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Expose yourself to your deepest fear. After that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free." -Jim Morrison
"Don't think or judge. Just listen." -Sarah Dessen

Sarah Dessen is my FAVORITE author!!!

on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:02 pm
BeczLuvzYew BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life like there is no tomorrow, with endless laughs, and love as deep as the ocean

It was amazing!! It makes everyone truly beleive that they can find love and happiness just by being themself:) I recomend reading any book by Sarah Dessen she's my favorite author and i think ull enjoy her writing

HapHapHappy said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 1:49 pm
So romantice!!!!!:)

on Sep. 20 2011 at 6:19 am
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

LOVE IT!!!! write a book 2!!

zyxwvu said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 11:48 am
zyxwvu, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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It's very interesting to read :D
Although, there's some grammar issues, and I think that if they were corrected, I would be even more interested. I'll be reading the whole book C: 

on Aug. 29 2011 at 9:45 am
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

The last paragraph made me feel good inside, and I don't know why. Anyway..I'll be at the Boyfriend Shoppe getting a guy like Mike :D. Lol, I loved, loved, LOVED this!! You should add more and make it longer, and try to get it published!!! 

on Aug. 10 2011 at 5:11 pm
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"

Makes you fell like you can do most anything now very inspirational




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