Even as the Sky Falls

October 27, 2013
By DanielShepard BRONZE, Dugway, Utah
DanielShepard BRONZE, Dugway, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Whether you think you can or you think you can’t, you’re right. –Henry Ford


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Even as the Sky Falls


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on Nov. 7 2013 at 11:56 am
Boybridgman BRONZE, Dugway, Utah
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eh, i hve strories that out do this ione. evber heard of avatar... thats my engineious and jms cameron took my ider

on Nov. 6 2013 at 9:18 am
Oh, definitely repost it here. :) Good luck!

A Proud Mama said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 11:56 pm
Wow!!!! Is ALL I can say......

on Nov. 5 2013 at 10:10 pm
DanielShepard BRONZE, Dugway, Utah
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whether you think you can or you think you can’t, you’re right. –Henry Ford

Should i repost it on here or should i put it somewhere else and send it to you?  

on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:19 pm
Yay! :D Can't wait to read it.

on Nov. 5 2013 at 11:34 am
DanielShepard BRONZE, Dugway, Utah
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whether you think you can or you think you can’t, you’re right. –Henry Ford

Thank you very much. I will try to fix the ending a bit and make this a bit longer.

on Nov. 4 2013 at 5:33 pm
The plot twist about the asteroid was very abrupt and unexpected and I don't know if it fits with such a short book like this, but I do like the idea of this couple being in love and dying together. It's very sad and romantic. I seriously see a ton of potential this story and I wish you would take it and make it into something really big! I think it would make an excellent novel. If the readers knew the characters better and got really involved in the story, the ending of Max and Samantha dying together would even more emotional.  Anyways, I definitely hope you write more of this! And good luck!  :)




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