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The Black Cardigan

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ELM522
The Black Cardigan
Summary: "Mira was fifteen with blonde curls. Her smile resembled a toy doll’s smile and her perfume entered each room before she did. Mira was included in every single picture in the den, whether was on a mantel or hanging above the fireplace.
She performed well in her classes, not outstandingly, but her work stood out from her acquaintances’. She would hum answers and nod. She walked with a sort of elegance, as if each stride was attached to a blissful cloud. Yet unlike her classmates, whispers and whistles very rarely trailed behind her. On the occasion that they did, she would walk on, undaunted."





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Vagabond said...
Jul. 15, 2012 at 5:38 am:

The story is nice just it gets a lil confusing in the mid. Otherwise i loved it!!

Good Job!! :)

 
ELM522This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 6:42 pm :
Thank you!  Hopefully it becomes less confusing once I write more.
 
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