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HomeWhat is Love?
What is Love?
Summary: Jarrod doesn't know who to point fingers at, so he blames his Dad for his parents divorce(it has to be someone's fault...right?). He's quickly fading out of this world or at least trying to.
Corrie(short for Cordelia but no one calls her that)is the model student, perfect grades, class president, and voted most likely to succeed. To the average on-looker she has a great life, but Jarrod is no average on-looker.
Corrie(short for Cordelia but no one calls her that)is the model student, perfect grades, class president, and voted most likely to succeed. To the average on-looker she has a great life, but Jarrod is no average on-looker.
Atychiphobia
You have to continue this! I need to know more! I've already connected with your brilliantly built characters, and I must see their stories completed.
msoledadvcPlease please please please write more!! I love this but I need more!! This book is really great!
Thank you! I am glad that you're enjoying it, but I've been thinking about abandoning this book because it's moving a bit too fast for me...
Why?! No, don't leave it as a cliff-hanger, it's really good!
ScribbleTopOMG is this Kendall?
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alyssabug97I really liked it! This book and u could go places keep it up!
Emma341997This is really good! It seems like this could go really far! Only thing I think could be better is they way you describe her old boyfriend. I want to know more about him and what he did to her. Other than that I like it!
Timekeeper♫ Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more ♫
I like your novel :D
DiamondsIntheGrassgood, good... potential is there. can't tell much so far. but there are several grammatical errors, making for bumpy reading. and perhaps in the old boyfriend bit with corrie you could have eased in a bit more. took me a couple of rereads to get that she was talking about an old boyfriend.
Thank you for the feedback! I reread my story and found a few typos too and I'm sorry about that I'll be more careful next because they bother me too! And I see what you mean about Corrie's old boyfriend I could've introduced that a bit better... but I wanted it to be unclear at first because I was going to go into it later.
wow. i just realized that there is a typo in that response too... sorry about that.
CrazyWriterI'm interested please post more .....it looksl like you have a good plot going..
purple_ashesI really like this great work :) keep posting!
You're the first person to comment my piece, you don't happy that makes me:) I am posting tomorrow!
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