What is Love?

December 20, 2010
By Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan


Summary:

Jarrod doesn't know who to point fingers at, so he blames his Dad for his parents divorce(it has to be someone's fault...right?). He's quickly fading out of this world or at least trying to.
Corrie(short for Cordelia but no one calls her that)is the model student, perfect grades, class president, and voted most likely to succeed. To the average on-looker she has a great life, but Jarrod is no average on-looker.


Kendall N.

What is Love?


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on Jun. 5 2012 at 1:51 am
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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Why?! No, don't leave it as a cliff-hanger, it's really good!

on Mar. 10 2012 at 7:05 pm
Atychiphobia BRONZE, Tehachapi, California
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Favorite Quote:
Growing old is mandatory. Growing up is optional.

You have to continue this! I need to know more! I've already connected with your brilliantly built characters, and I must see their stories completed. 

on Nov. 2 2011 at 8:04 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

Thank you! I am glad that you're enjoying it, but I've been thinking about abandoning this book because it's moving a bit too fast for me...

on Oct. 31 2011 at 9:55 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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Please please please please write more!! I love this but I need more!! This book is really great!

on Aug. 28 2011 at 2:05 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

um...depends on who's asking i guess

ScribbleTop said...
on May. 7 2011 at 8:21 pm
ScribbleTop, Columbia, South Carolina
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OMG is this Kendall? 

on May. 7 2011 at 1:29 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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I love it! Please write more!

on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:45 pm
lyssamarie97 BRONZE, Centralia, Washington
3 articles 3 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am, I am, I am." Slyvia Plath, The Bell Jar

I really liked it! This book and u could go places keep it up!

tanaya BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 9:08 pm
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
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This is sooooooo awesome! :)

on Mar. 24 2011 at 1:51 pm
Emma341997 BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies, but it doesn't matter because nobody listens.

This is really good! It seems like this could go really far! Only thing I think could be better is they way you describe her old boyfriend. I want to know more about him and what he did to her. Other than that I like it!

on Jan. 4 2011 at 2:48 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
62 articles 0 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

♫ Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more ♫

 

I like your novel :D


on Dec. 31 2010 at 1:33 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

wow. i just realized that there is a typo in that response too... sorry about that.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 9:57 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

You're the first person to comment my piece, you don't happy that makes me:) I am posting tomorrow!

on Dec. 26 2010 at 9:55 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

Thank you:) I am updating tomorrow!

on Dec. 26 2010 at 9:54 pm
Kneubeiser4 PLATINUM, Chapin, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never say goodbye, because saying goodbye means going away... and going away means forgetting. - Peter Pan

Thank you for the feedback! I reread my story and found a few typos too and I'm sorry about that I'll be more careful next because they bother me too! And I see what you mean about Corrie's old boyfriend I could've introduced that a bit better... but I wanted it to be unclear at first because I was going to go into it later.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 6:41 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

good, good... potential is there.  can't tell much so far.  but there are several grammatical errors, making for bumpy reading.  and perhaps in the old boyfriend bit with corrie you could have eased in a bit more.  took me a couple of rereads to get that she was talking about an old boyfriend.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 11:00 am
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

I'm interested please post more .....it looksl like you have a good plot going..

on Dec. 24 2010 at 5:59 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 257 comments
I really like this great work :) keep posting!




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