Mechanical Practicality

May 28, 2012
By xMIRandax SILVER, Ellicott City, Maryland
xMIRandax SILVER, Ellicott City, Maryland
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm gonna' make you feel like a zoo plankton goin' up against Shamu!"~ Blue & Clam


Summary:

Jazz is a poor factory worker living in the slums of one of the biggest Factory Cities in the world. She's harboring a secret that could not only catapult her into the world of the rich and prosperous, but also spell out her quick and painful death.

Puck is the son and only heir to the richest man in the world; the sole owner of Adkins Industries, the company that owned every factory in the world. Puck has an amazing artistic gift that his father has no qualms in abusing.

Jazz and Puck are completely opposite in every way, but what happens when nasty secrets are brought into light and they must work together to survive in a dangerous world that Jazz in only all to familiar with and Puck is only just realizing exists.


Miranda M.

Mechanical Practicality


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on Mar. 9 2014 at 9:35 pm
CurlyGirl17 SILVER, Corydon, Indiana
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This is really good so far! Your characters are so well developed, and the futuristic, dystopian lifestyle is interesting. I'd really appreciate it if you gave me some advice on my story The Sky's the Limit in the Romance section- you're a great writer! :)

on Jun. 5 2012 at 10:14 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

I love this--perfect combination of description, action, different moods throughout the story. I need to read more!! X D

on Jun. 5 2012 at 10:12 pm
xMIRandax SILVER, Ellicott City, Maryland
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm gonna' make you feel like a zoo plankton goin' up against Shamu!"~ Blue & Clam

It's times like these that I wish this site had a like button. 

OwenDark said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 10:10 pm
OwenDark, Ellicott City, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Too late."

I too enjoy your writing style. It is very clean and neat. It leaves me with the same feeling that a widely published novel does--fresh, relinquished. I see a contract of some kind in your future...

on Jun. 5 2012 at 9:55 pm
xMIRandax SILVER, Ellicott City, Maryland
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm gonna' make you feel like a zoo plankton goin' up against Shamu!"~ Blue & Clam

:) Thanks for the feedback! And more is definitely on the way. 

half.note said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:55 pm
half.note, Edmonton, Alberta
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Must. Read. More. *gasps*

Seriously, your work is terrific!

I love the characters, the plot, and your writing style.

Great job!



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