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The Fallen Angel: The Beginning

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The Fallen Angel: The Beginning
Summary: Gabriel, a prince of a legendary family of angels, was sent to the far reaches of the universe by the an evil admiral from the feared group called the darkness. Now stuck on earth he must cope with society for three years with the help of a girl name Sierra. What Gabriel doesn't know that there is something heading this way.





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Cryptic_Lover said...
May 29 at 2:53 pm:
Your story goes way to fast. Slowing down a little would help. I cant even tell what laeron is from the lack of detail. Not being mean just some tips from aspiring writer to another aspiring writer.
 
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