My Evil Angel

April 11, 2011
By ZeeBYoung BRONZE, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
ZeeBYoung BRONZE, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't judge a person until you've walked a mile in their shoes. That way, you're a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. :)


Summary:

Meet Audrey Lawrence. An outsider by choice with a sixth sense, never really interacted with other students, until she was forced to for an english project. This other student is Noah, a normally quiet, emo kid with a crazy past, and jumps at any chance to defend those he cares about. Specifically when his pal Wesley (Nemo) is bullied by the school tough guy, Desmond. Only a few problems. Desmond isn't human. What is he? Well only Desmond knows. And his father of course. When Noah and Desmond get tangled in a forever escalating feud, Audrey worries, but doesn't know how to help. Sensing something off about Desmond, she prefers to stay as far away from him as possible. All she knows for sure, is everyone's going to get hurt, in one way or another...

Tags: Supernatural


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on Dec. 22 2011 at 3:42 am
ZeeBYoung BRONZE, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't judge a person until you've walked a mile in their shoes. That way, you're a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. :)

Askdfak I'm sorry! I've just been so busy with other things that I haven't gotten around to it. But I will find time! I WILL. :)

on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:12 pm
IsabelleRamsay SILVER, Oakville, Other
7 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whats the point of living, when you are just going to die anyway?- me.

OMF YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING, it's amaZing!!!!!

on Jun. 21 2011 at 2:27 am
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
11 articles 1 photo 22 comments
Completely lovely! (Hm, that just doesn't seem to be the right word, considering everything in the novel....) but all the same!

on Jun. 20 2011 at 3:33 pm
ZeeBYoung BRONZE, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't judge a person until you've walked a mile in their shoes. That way, you're a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. :)

Oh thanks so much! Im glad you like it! Don't worry, Ill be sure to get the next chunk of the story in as soon as possible. And I honestly dont know where this came from. I just know I wanted to do something with demons instead of the usual vampire, werewof, angel stories.

on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:38 pm
changerswriter GOLD, Rancho Mirage, California
11 articles 1 photo 22 comments
OMG. Please write more!! I love it! How could you leave us hanging?! I love your style of writing, and where did you come up with the idea. Completely original.

Mary_S. said...
on May. 3 2011 at 4:45 pm
Mary_S., Grand Blanc, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Welcome to the New World, where you'd better watch your neck."

Ok, thanks. I'll have to check that out.

And once again, ZeeBYoung, keep up the good work!


on May. 2 2011 at 4:28 pm
SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."

Totally has nothing to do with the book (yet), but Mary_S., you should read Romeo's Ex by Lisa Fiedler.  It tells the story from Rosaline's point of view, and the ending of it really summarizes how fickle Romeo appears to be.  I liked it.

on Apr. 26 2011 at 3:29 pm
Taylor_Renee GOLD, St. Paul, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you will live forever,
Live as if you will die tomorrow.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My fave line is: "The toothfairy told me if i do it, I get a dollar" hahahahahahahaha.

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!


zeebyoung said...
on Apr. 14 2011 at 1:39 pm
thanx. ill add more to this as the story progresses, and i manage to get it on here. this has been very informing, and i really appreciate it.

Mary_S. said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 12:43 pm
Mary_S., Grand Blanc, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Welcome to the New World, where you'd better watch your neck."

Hm, the grammar's a little iffy in some places, but this comes off as a really funny story. And you are completely right about Romeo and Juliet being mental. "I'm so busy angsting over Rosaline that I can't even look at other girls. Oh, wait! That chick's hott, she'll be my new obsession!" and from there on both Romeo and Juliet move into the "If things don't go my way I'll kill myself!" and then they do. That's not normal.

Still, I enjoyed reading Romeo and Juliet, but I seem to have had a better teacher!

Good story, keep up the good work!



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