Enchanted to meet you

February 10, 2011
By shannonbfly, No Where, New Jersey
shannonbfly, No Where, New Jersey
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Summary:

This is a great book written by- Shannon Mc Carthy. This is her first book. She loves to write; please read.
~Ronnie


Shannon M.

Enchanted to meet you


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Mak101 said...
on Apr. 4 2011 at 12:27 pm
Mak101, Anonymous, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
People can only break you if you let them.

I really don't like the way this story was written. You could have done a better job on the plot and wording. Not to mention you didn't use poper spelling nor grammer AND you didn't have a proper layout for your story.

 

this;

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 Blah, blah blah.

 

Is how you show change in time not this -----------------------------.

 

 Another thing is there are no paragraphs! You definatly should work on bettering your writting before you try to except compliments about 'wow she's such a good writter. 





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