Vampire Sisters

January 15, 2011
By tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Summary:

A young vampire, not more than 14 is willing to face the dangers of the outside world to find her dad's murderer.

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Vampire Sisters


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tanaya BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2011 at 4:43 pm
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments
ok? i guess...............

Sohom Sen said...
on Sep. 17 2011 at 4:18 pm

EPIC book

read the whole thing

know you only missing one thing,

A member ship of MACHINIMA

 

Jk you not a gamer, not even pro

 


tanaya BRONZE said...
on May. 26 2011 at 4:28 pm
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Thanks! :)

 


on May. 8 2011 at 11:59 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

I love how you compared it to the Twilight saga that was really cool!!! :))

tanaya BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 7:36 pm
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Thank you for your comments!

Sure I'll check out your work!


PJD17 SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 3:50 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 624 comments

Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

Vampire literture has been a little bit over done as of latly but yours is still very impressive  keep it up  i would be interested to read some more of your work  could you please check out and comment on my story Manso's Shame  i would really apreciate it

sobuj123 said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 4:18 am

nice job tanaya.

it is absolutely mervellous.keep it up.


tanaya BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 3:39 pm
tanaya BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments
Thanks guys!

on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:35 pm
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
1 article 4 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about just waiting out the storm. It's about learning to dance in the rain."

Good job! Really creepy, I like it ;)

alex said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 6:51 pm

heyyy tanaya!!!

nice job

really good


gurleen said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 4:07 pm
wow...really good up to here !!

Moumita said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 12:41 am
Good work Tanaya...Keep it up

aruban said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 10:20 am

Well done, waiting for your next story like this. How to create a vamapire story? simple tips as follows:

A good place to start is by reviewing other vampire fiction. Read the folklore, read the classics as well as current vampire books. Watch the movies and the televisions shows. Then forget about everything else you've read and seen and develop a vampire universe that is yours.
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RUBEL said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:03 am

Excellent, Good work Tanaya.

Keep it up


ronny said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:06 pm

Firstly, scary! You can actually think from the PoV of a vampire and that too with so much ease that it makes one wonder. Are you....? :) 

Secondly, really nice read, very imaginative and beautifully laid out. What I like, especially, is the plot line that is so intricately woven. Mighty nice, I must say! 


Sohom S said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 2:41 pm

Nice work Tanaya

You must've worked you butt of.

Suggestion: Make chapters a begining of a new topic like a ordinary novel

Like: Use of detail, vivid details, topic


Sylvie BRONZE said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 6:24 pm
Sylvie BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
3 articles 19 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All kids are gifted; some just open their packages earlier than others" - Michael Carr

nice! :D I really like the vivid descriptions and how you move the plot along very well. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter, this is a good mystery book. ;) nice jobbb

Lahari GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 4:27 pm
Lahari GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
19 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That\\\\\\\'s why its called the present.\\\\\\\"
— Eleanor Roosevelt

\\\\\\\"When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and watch as the world wonders how you did it.\\\\\\\'

Its really good, except I don't think u should divide the chapters like that. they're not exactly a new "segment," but more of a continuation of the previous thought.

:-) Keep up the good work. (woW that sounds cheezy)


KonyaB!!! GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 10:00 am
KonyaB!!! GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 99 comments
OMG...so good so far. :D




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