Serial Killer Of My Heart

January 3, 2011
By Your_Beautiful_Lies SILVER, Cairo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Expirence is a brutal teacher, but we learn. My God do we learn."~C.S.Lewis








OR
What saves a man is to take a step. Then another step. It is always the same step, but you have to take it. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, Wind, Sand and Stars, 1939, translated from French by Lewis Galantière


Author's note: Criminal Minds was my inspiration.

I looked up from writing in my journal as the plane bounced to a stop, I never slept when I was on the BAU plane, and I mostly read or did some writing. I looked up and seen Spencer open his eyes, I then turned my attention back to my book. I sighed know that the team and I had put one more psycho path in the ground or behind bars, in this guys case behind bars. “Hey Prentiss” Morgan said from in front of me as we all stood up and gathered our things. “Yea Morgan?” she asked as I placed my book in my bag and stood there, and looked at Morgan, who was smiling at me, knowing he could see the bags under my eyes. “Let’s go out tonight. Come on Reid, Garcia, Smith and I are going out… lets got have some fun.” He said with that playboy smile that could get him any girl in the world. That’s what I liked about Morgan he was like my brother and he knew the smile to give me to make me melt in his dark colored hands. Morgan has been the 1st friend I had made in the BAU beside my father, David Rossi. They always called my father, Big Rossi, and then me, Little Rossi. “I don’t know Morgan. Hey Rossi you going to come with us?” she asked me as we all unloaded the plane and walked toward the airport. I was the only Rossi this team trip, I looked over at her as Spencer, I, Morgan and Emily walked toward the exit. “No… I have a few things I need to take care of. I have to get back to my dead fish.” I said with a smile, and Morgan laughed and then threw his arm around my shoulder. Morgan was the best thing to happen to me beside Zach. Morgan and I had been in College together and graduated the top of our class. “Those poor fish how many have you gone through?” he asked me with a twinkle in his eye. He knew my track record with fish as well as my track record with guys, not too long in my defense. “12 and ½ I had a small little fish and it died and hour after I got it, didn’t even make it to the freaking bowl died in the car” I said with a smile. That was the day my Niece had gone to Wal-Mart and got it for me. I went to get it from her and on the car ride back to my house, it died, dead as a door nail. “You know the life span of a fish?” chimed in Spencer as we walked toward the exit. Spencer was always telling us none useful facts but that’s what I was drawn to him for, his very cute nerdiness that I was attracted too. Morgan and Zach, where the only ones who knew that I liked Spencer and I had threatened them many time and they haven’t told him. “Spencer you have told us before the life span of a fish.” I answered and looked over at him and his curly hair. He grinned at me and pulled at his shoulder bag. Derek, Emily, Spencer, Aaron and I were the only ones on the last case because my dad, David, couldn’t make it because he had something to do for the FBI, Zach couldn’t make it because he had fractured his wrist on the last case and JJ stayed back with Penelope to work the case from here in Virginia. Aaron has driven back yesterday to be with Jack. “Well guys we are home for now” I said as we exited the airport to our personal cars locked away. I walked over to my car and got in it, with my cell phone thrown in the seat, I waited for everyone else to leave. I then drove away behind Morgan; I had not been home in over two weeks. I had missed home but I never got comfortable at my house because I knew the moment I would relax the BAU awaited for us to put away another criminal. ~20 minutes later~ I pulled into the driveway of my apartment complex; I lived in the studio on the top floor a whole huge space for me and my writing. I then grabbed all the stuff I had taken with me and started up the steps to the building, after punching in my code and getting the main door opened, I walked to the elevator and pushed the up button. I stood there looking down at my shoes, not protocol shoes because I never wore them, I always had on my scuffed up converse. The elevator dinged as the doors opened and Ms. Miscall stood there with her grandson, James. I smiled as they got off and I got back on, I knew they lived in 3B. James was almost 20 and taking care of his grandmother who was schizophrenia, in some ways he reminded me of Spencer. I smiled as the doors closed and knew I was that much closer to home, I rested my back against the back of the elevator and counted in my head until it dinged on the 17th floor. Opening my eyes I walked out the doors, once they opened, to door that was 3 feet in front of me, the door way to my house. Taking out my keys from my pocket, I had stuffed in there once I got back; I unlocked the door and walking in. Dropping my s**t to the right of the door, I sighed and shut the door and locked it and then turned on the Broadband security system, the lights flipped on, casting light upon my house. My apartment was how I left it, messy just like my life for the most part. I sighed and seen my poor fish Alfred, fish number 13, belly up. I sighed and walked over to the tank and taped it a few times, he didn’t move. I had seen where Maria, the cleaning lady had been yesterday, she knew better then to touch most of the stuff, she just cleaned the floors, bathroom, trash, windows and made the bed. She left everything else untouched. “May, my dear Alfred rest in peace” I said as I grabbed a plastic cup from the trashcan beside the fish tank, scooping up a cup almost full of water and Alfred I walked into the bathroom and flipped on the light and lifted the toilet seat, I dumped the cup and flushed. I threw the cup in the trashcan and walked out of the bathroom leaving the light on because a nice warmer shower was screaming my name. I pulled out my cell phone and opened a new text message and sent it to Morgan *fish number 13, May the poor damn thing rest in peace* I then closed the phone knowing Morgan would be laughing when he read it. I sighed and then walked into the bathroom and stripped my clothes away while turning on the CD player and pushing random play. My Chemical Romance came blasting out as I turned the water on hot and the room filled with steam. As the water washed over me I realized how tired I was… I finished up and got out all nice and clean. I walked into my bedroom with a towel on and pulled on some regular work clothes and walked into the living room. I sighed as I sat down on the couch and picked up a case file from the coffee table. I opened it and seen it was the case of my Parents, Marlow and Doyle Mathis. I was about to flip up the picture when a knock came from the door, I sighed, closing the folder. I wondered who it could be; the rest of the team was out and about. “Who is it?” I called hand on my gun as a precaution. I took my gun everywhere with me, well to most places but it was always in my car, ready to use. “Who the hell do you think” I heard Zach say sarcastically from the other side of the door. I smiled and placed my gun on the coffee table. I pushed the disarm button and unlocked the door. I then stood back as he threw open the door. I looked and seen Morgan, Reid, Prentiss, JJ, Henry, Garcia, Hotchner, his son, Jack, and my dad standing in the small space. I smiled seeing them all, they all smiled back at me. I knew then that my family was here... why they were here I had no clue to. “What the…hey….” I said as I looked at them with wonder. Morgan laughed a little and held up a pack of root beer while Garcia held up a bag with snacks in it. The smile on my face got wider as I rolled my eyes. “We decided we would come celebrate the life of little Alfred Rossi. What a young life gone to soon” Zach stated as they filled in. I rolled my eyes and then ran to clear some spots, Morgan dropped the soda on the coffee table and they all sat down causing quit chatter among their self’s. “Aunt Lacey” Jack said as he ran to me and I picked him up and hugged him. Jack looked so much like Hotch it wasn’t funny, but in little Jack I could see Haley. “Hey Jackie, how’s it going?” I asked as he hugged my neck. His mother and I, Haley, were close before she died and Zach and I joined the force. I had missed a lot most of the stuff I knew about but never said anything. “Can I watch TV in your bedroom?” he whispered to me and I nodded my head, Morgan and Emily were fighting for the remote, they had made themselves at home on the couch, as I walked Jack into my room and turned on some cartoons. I sighed and left him in there and walked back out to all my friends, Reid was looking at my artist table, the ones artist use to paint on; I had my writing on there. He was picking up random pieces of papers like he was looking at a crime scene. “So Rossi… I mean Li-Li” Morgan said, using my nick name as both my father and I looked at him, “how long did this fish live?” he asked me as I rolled my eyes and walked over to my father and gave him a hug. “Morgan he lived as far as I know a hole month… a lot longer than the rest of them.”I said and Morgan laughed and grabbed for a soda. “Hey baby” Dad said to me as I stood beside him, I was taller than him but he didn’t care. “Hey daddy I missed you” I said as I kissed his cheek, I was daddy’s little girl, I was there through all 3 ex-wives and knew that he cared more about me and his job then he did them. David had become my dad when I was 14. I looked and seen Hotch look around looking for little Jack. “Bedroom Hotch” I said as I walked over and sat down next to JJ who was holding little Henry Jones, I smiled and took him from her, he was a little over 2 years old. He was playing with a toy she had brought with him. “So JJ, where is that man of yours?” I asked referring to William, the man she met on their ‘Jack the Ripper’ case in New Orleans. “He is taking the day off and doing nothing and I thought I would bring little Henry and give him some time alone. Then Nanny Ellie is going to watch him so we can have some alone time” she said, I gave her a wink and she rolled her eyes, then we all watched the TV as Emily choose the TV channel. I zoned out as we watched something on Paper View, some new movie called Zombie land… ~2 hours later~ I woke with a start of something moving in my bed with me, I opened my eyes to see myself completely blind. Wait, how did I get in bed? My mind screamed as I reach for my glasses and placed them on my face and looked over and seen little Jack fast sleep next to me, I blinked and then it all came back to me. I threw the covers off me but not little Jack. Careful not to wake Jack, I got out of bed and seen that it was like 2 in the morning. I was wide awake and a little confused as to why Jack was with me. I opened my door and walked into the living room and seen Hotch asleep on my couch with the TV on the news. I sighed and walked into the kitchen careful not to wake Hotch. I walked straight to the fridge and opened it; I reach for a bottle of water and then pulled out of the fridge. My sleep pattern was so screwed up it didn’t matter I got my 4 hours of sleep and was good to go for days. I opened it and took 3 big gulps, and then broke away breathing kind of hard. I turned after I closed the fridge and jumped to see Zach sitting at the table with his back to the wall, sleeping like a baby. I then rolled my eyes and left him, he had slept like that before. I then finished off the water and went back into the bedroom and crawled back in the bed with Jack. “Jack we are home for now” I said as I took off my glasses and cuddled up next to him, kissing him on the forehead I then fell back to sleep.

I opened my eyes to the sound of my cell phone ringing and the sound of SpongeBob Square Pants laughing from my TV. I reach over and flipped open my cell phone open and placed it to my ear. I didn’t look at the caller I.D. because I knew in the pit of my stomach that it was JJ calling from the voice, and when she calls it is never good. “Agent Rossi” I said sleep leaving my voice as I sat up and felt for my glasses.
“Hey Lace its JJ. We got a case and it’s pretty bad. Office 20 minutes and hurry, tell Hotch and Zach” she said as I flipped it closed and looked and seen Jack looking at me with sad eyes. “Aunt Lacey do you and dad have to leave?” he asked me and I shook my head yes, he let his head drop. I jumped out of bed and grabbed new black pants, a black tank top, a white low cut shirt, a black button up jacket and some new undergarments. I bounced out of the bedroom to the bathroom. “HOTCH, ZACH WAKE UP WE GOTTA CASE…. 20 MINUTES AT THE OFFICE AND FROM THE SOUNDS OF IT, IT IS A BAD ONE!!!!!!!!!!” I yelled and then slammed the door.








~10 minutes later~
I walked out dressed and seen Hotch, Jack and Zach sitting on the couch ready to go. I walked out and threw my wet hair in a messy bun. “Ready?” I asked as Hotch stood up holding Jack. Zach was pulling on a sweater and I pulled on my black converse. “I’m going to run Jack to Elli’s” he said referring to the babysitter. I nodded and I turned off all the TVs, light and anything else that I didn’t need. I sighed and then walked out of the apartment closing and locking the door. The elevator dinged and we all got on, it was silent as the elevator took its time going down. After we reach the first floor, we all took off in a face kind of pace because we knew that an innocent life was at stake. I sighed as I walked into the bright sunlight, shielding my eyes, Zach and I walked to my car and got in.
I hated the drive to the office because I knew that the time I wasted sitting at the red light someone was being murdered. I looked at Zach as I jumped into the driver seat. I sighed as I pulled out and on to the main road doing 10 over the speed limit until a red light caught me and I started to strum my fingers on the wheel. Waiting was never my strong point, even as a kid I never had the will to sit in one place for long. “Girl what’s on your mind?” he asked knowing me better than anyone, well almost anyone. David knew me better than anyone; I mean he did save my life. I had been friends with Zach back in North Carolina, we went to grad school together before I left and moved to South Carolina, where I lived until my parents died in then Zach found me and we moved to Virginia with David.
“I just hate sitting at red lights because I know for every moment I sit at this freaking red light someone is dying in the world and I can’t do a damn thing but sit here. I mean everywhere I go I hate it because I know that I may either be walking past a serial killer or our next victim.” I said with a sigh as the light changed green and I steps on the gas, taking off pretty fast I switched lanes and drove for a few more minutes before pulling into the parking lot. Zach and I jumped out as I grabbed one of my gun and badge from the glove compartment and we walked inside. The elevator dinged as it came to the first floor, I also had a nervous disorder, and I twirled my hair. Everyone knew when we had a case because I also was playing with my shoulder length hair. Spencer was the first one to notice when Zach and I came here that I was a very nervous kind of person.
“Hey Lacey” Zach said to me as I looked up from the passenger seat of my red 2009 mustang, I had been sitting in the parking lot for the last 30 minutes. I was waiting on Zach and my father, David. “Hey Zach.” I said as I twirled my hair and looked at him giving him a scared smile and I knew that he was also nervous because he was blinking a lot. Zach always seems to do that when he was nervous or he would pull at his cloths. “Are you ready for our first day of the BAU?” he asked me and I recalled when he asked me that the same day when we went for FBI training. I looked at him with a smile on my face knowing that he knew the answer.
“Like I told you the first day of training that I am not but I know this is what I want to do. I also know that you and David will be there with me the whole way.” I said with a smile as I grabbed my folder and got out of my car, fixing my red low cut shirt I closed my door and locked it. I took a deep breath and watched as my dad walked out the front door. I seen the happy smile on his face as he looked over and seen Zach and I.
I snapped out of it when the elevator dinged to the floor, I was twirling my hair as Zach and I walked out of the elevator. Morgan was picking on Prentiss about how a date went the last night. They looked over when Zach and I walked in, they seen and the smiles kind of disappeared off their faces and I gave them a half hearted smile and walked on to the conference room. I sat down at the table and Zach sat beside me. Emily and Derek came in, Derek was picking some lint off his clothes and Emily was looking at her watch. “Do we know how bad it is?” Emily asked as she looked at me, I shrugged my shoulders.
“I don’t know Emily. JJ just said it was pretty bad and to be in the office in 20 minutes and that was 10 minutes ago. I guess she is watching for Rossi, Hotch and Reid” I said as if on cue Spencer walked in with coffee in his hand. Spencer had an addiction to coffee he just didn’t say anything about it. “Speak and he shale be found” Zach said as Emily, Derek and I smile. Reid looked at us, I just smiled more. “So what are we talking about?” Rossi asked as he walked in, he looked at me and I smiled at him and then he sat down at the head of the table as JJ and Hotch walked in.
“So what do we know?” I asked as Garcia walked in she was always colorful and looked cute. “A serial killer in Bellevue, Ohio. All we now is that the Unsub is targeting young men between the ages of 16 and 17 after the Unsub killed a group of 20 something’s.” JJ said as she clicked on the picture and I we seen the pictures, the first thing I noticed was the lipstick on the side of the face and the face, Dillon Woods. “Wait JJ” I said as I jumped up and walked up to the TV and took a closer look at the picture. “What do you see little Rossi?” Morgan asked as I turned my head and looked really hard.
“Um from what I can see there is lipstick on the side of the victim’s neck and cheek and this is Dillon Woods.” I said as I took a step back and Spencer was right there looking at me. They all looked at me and JJ just went on. “It also seems the Unsub is stabbing the victims in the genitals about 40 or 50 times” JJ said and I winched just thinking about how that would feel to a guy. “Why so much anger to a guy?” Prentiss asked as JJ handed us all a file with the pictures, I picked up on a few things like the way the cloths were messy, the lipstick and that it looked like a dump site.
“How many boys have been reported missing or turned up dead?” Hotch asked as I looked up from the autopsy report. “12 dead and ones still missing from Norfolk called in about an hour ago.” JJ said as she clicked the next picture and I went back to looking at the picture. “Oh my…. Guys Bellevue is just the dump site. All the boys are from here I went to school with every one of them. Dad you remember Dillon Woods?” I asked looking over at David and he looked up at me. “Read me the other names. Anyone” I said as I jumped up and ran to the white board.
“Dillon Woods, Jordan Gray, Mason Amsterdam, Bill Wikes, Gene Scott, Justin Thomas, Peter Moore, Mark Wilson, Kyle Marks, Nathan Hawes, Cleveland Robert and the missing one is Carter Scott. It says here…” Morgan was saying until I cut him off.
“That Gene and Carter are brother. Yea they are fraternal twins. They have a sister names Jessica. She was raped when she was 10, they never found out who done it. Their parents Mena and Jason got a divorce and Mena and Jessica moved to Bellevue about 2 months after it has happened. I had complete forgot about them, they were some of my best friends like Dillon.” I said with a shocked tone in my voice and pointed to the picture on the TV. I looked at Rossi as he looked at me. “I want to go talk to Jessica and her mom and see if they know anything about it and look at the crime scenes.” I said as I grabbed the rest of the files of the other guys and looked around.
“Okay Li-Li, Rossi, Reid and I will head to Bellevue. Morgan, Prentiss and Smith see where the guys live now go over everything.” Hotch said as I grabbed my bag and stuffed the profiles in there, JJ was going to make calls and I was going to grab a few more things. “Hey Garcia can you do me a favor and find where Jessica Scott lives now?” I asked her as she walked out right in front of me. “Sure thing Princess” she said to me with a smile and a list from Morgan to also track. I smiled and got to my desk, I sat down and grabbed a few things and picked up a picture from one of my picture frames of a young couple at the age of 17. There were 14 of them; it was all the guys who were dead, my brother and I standing outside a baseball field. My brother disappeared a month after that…

The basis of optimism is sheer terror: Oscar Wilde
For once I slept on the plane there but it was only for about 20minutes, I had more than enough when I passed out at my party and then woke up the next morning. That night I had more sleep then I was use to and it felt good but this was my job. I heard the lap top start to buzz as Garcia was calling. I jumped up from where I was sitting and ran over to the laptop on the plane. “Yes sugar pie” I said as her face came on the screen. I smile and she smiled back at me Garcia was one of my best friends and I loved the way her and Derek talked to each other. I smiled and looked at her. “What do you have for us Garcia” Rossi said from behind me. I looked up and also seen Reid and Hotch behind me.
“Jessica Scott lives at 57 Left Lane, Bellevue” she said as I took it down and then sighed off. I sighed as we then got ready to land. After we got off the plane, a sheriff stood at his car. “You guys must be from the BAU. I’m Officer Landon Wright” he said as he shook our hands. “I’m Aaron Hotchner, this is Lacey Rossi, David Rossi and Spencer Reid” he said as I looked at him and waved, he also looked from David and me.
“David is my father. Dad… I mean Rossi how about you and Spencer go to the crime scene and Hotch and I will go find Jessica” I said as he looked at me. Hotch nodded his head, and I smiled as another officer was in a ca not far from us. I sighed and picked up my bag and placed it in another cop car to take to the office. I sighed and walked to the one officer. “I’m agent Dawson Green” he said with a sly smile, I smiled back and we climbed into the car. Hotch was on the phone with JJ. I sighed as the cop drove to the house, I sighed as I opened my phone and seen a new text message from Zach.
*Ahhhhhhh!!!! You lose love. J* I rolled my eyes and closed my phone; Zach always knew how to make my smile during a case. “So Agent Rossi,” Officer Green said and I looked over at him, “How long have you been working for the BAU?” he asked me. I smiled as Hotch got off the phone.
“Um David adopted me when I was 14 and I was already in my senior year at high school. I am now 25 and working for the BAU. I am a very smart kid, but not as smart as the other guy Spencer. ” I said as he pulled into a suburb. I looked for the 57. “There” I said pointing to the number 57 on one of the mail boxes. He nodded and started for the drive. “What happen to your parents?” he asked me as we pulled up and I looked down,
“They were murdered when I was 14. That’s why David adopted me” I said with a sad smile but then shook it off. “So did you get any more information off JJ about Jessica Scott?” I asked as we got out of the car, I fixed the gun at my side and pulled my coat over it as we walked to the door. Officer Green stood behind me as we walked to the front steps. I knocked on the door and stepped back. I waited a few moments and the door opened a little ways. “Can I help you?” came a voice and I looked down and seen a little blonde five year old. She has a touch of Down syndrome you could see it on her face.
“Is Jessica Scott home?” I asked her as I got down at her level. She looked at me and then looked back and I seen an older women standing in the background. “Mena Drake” I said as she stepped forward a cigarette was on her mouth. “Yes who is asking?” she asked as she shoved the child back and then opened the door and then blew smoke in my face. “My mommy isn’t home right now” the little girl said as the grandmother then turned and back handed the little girl, I looked and felt Hotch take my arm. I let out a sigh as the little girl then got up and walked to the kitchen.
“My name is Lacey Rossi and I am from the FBI we need to ask her a few questions” I said as I seen Jessica walk into the living room, she was applying the lipstick from the crime scene photos. “Jessica it’s the FBI.” Mena said as Jessica looked at me and then at Hotch. “What is this all about I have to get work.” She said as she rolled her eyes and I seen a scratch on her hand. “This is about your brothers, Gene and Carter” I said as I seen her drop her eyeliner, her mom also dropped her Cigarette. “What about them?” her mom asked, she turned and looked at me with a nervous look on her face.









~30 minutes later~
After talking to them and getting nowhere Hotch and I headed to the crime scene. I sat in the front again as Officer Green took us to the crime scene. “Something wasn’t right about that” I said with a look of confusion on my face, something didn’t set right with me. “What is it Little Rossi” Hotch asked me from the back seat as I flipped my notes over trying to find something useful.
“Jessica was to clam for someone who just found out her brother was missing while one ended up dead” I said as I turned back and looked at Hotch, “Jessica’s mom was more upset then her… she seemed happy as almost guilty but not guilty” I said as I looked at Hotch, he gave me a confused look.
“Well we need to make a profile and hope no more boys go missing” Hotch said, I looked again at my notes and started to think. I looked up and see we pulled into an old rail station and raised an eye brow. I sighed and got out of the car shielding my eyes with my hand. We walked to where Reid stood talking to any officer that would listen. We made it to ear shot and heard Reid.
“The Norfolk & Western Railway was a unique operation of modest proportions that achieved recognition beyond contemporary railroads of similar size. In actuality, Norfolk & Western had two differing styles. Before 1964, it was a coal hauler known for its excellent financial performance, and which operated arguably the finest fleet of steam motive power at the head of long coal trains. The routine tonnage carried on these trains would be considered records elsewhere. Changes began first with dieselization and then merger with Virginian Railway in the late 1950's. In 1964 Norfolk & Western leased, merged with, or purchased several other railroads to expand its operation becoming a major Midwestern carrier. As such it operated routes from Norfolk VA and Buffalo NY to Chicago IL and St. Louis and Kansas City MO. On June 1, 1982 the Norfolk & Western, along with the Southern Railway, became subsidiaries of Norfolk Southern Corporation, a newly formed holding company. Finally on September 1, 1998 Norfolk & Western's corporate existence ended as it was merged into Norfolk Southern Corporation.[1]” Spencer said as we all looked at him. “What?” he asked and we rolled our eyes at him. I looked around at the rail road.
“Spencer… SHHH Mr. smarty pants” I said with a smile as I walked past him and seen a white glove a little far off. “Hey do you guys see that glove?” I asked as we all started to walk near it, I pulled on my gloves and then walked to where it stood and picked it up then it hit me.
“I can’t believe that someone would want to kill Carter and Gene!!!” Jessica said as I looked up and seen little Billie, as Jessica called her, came from one of the backrooms with a white glove on with a red bow and black cherry rhinestones right above the slot for the thumb. “Look at my glove mommy.” Billie said as she walked into the living room and wiggled her little fingers in big glove. “You little rat where did you get that?” Jessica asked as she ripped it off her hand then threw it in the cushion of the couch.
“What’s wrong Little Rossi?” David asked as I looked at him, I was still thinking but then I seen it hard the same black cherry design. “This glove, Jessica Scott has one just like it. She ripped it off her little girls hand when she came running into the living room with it.” I said as I placed it in the bag Spencer was holding open for me. I sighed and walked around not noticing anything else but the blood of several different victims. I took on the rail road tracks and seen an old building a few feet away, they had caution tape around it.
“Green” I said as he walked to where I stood. “What are they going to do with that old station over there?” I asked as I jumped down and looked up at him. “Um the last I heard they are going to blow it up in three days” he said with a shrug and walked back to the group. I sighed and looked down at the blood spatter, I sighed and then exhaled. This wasn’t getting crazy. I looked up and seen Reid looking at me. “So Reid why would someone go to the trouble of stabbing some guy in the groin?” I asked and he raised an eyebrow at me and walked over to me, the sky had become over cast because of the weather. I started to tap my cheek as he walked closer. “Well I think because of something tragic like a rape.” he said and then all the pieces fell into place.



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on Aug. 16 2011 at 10:17 am
Your_Beautiful_Lies SILVER, Cairo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Expirence is a brutal teacher, but we learn. My God do we learn."~C.S.Lewis








OR
What saves a man is to take a step. Then another step. It is always the same step, but you have to take it. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, Wind, Sand and Stars, 1939, translated from French by Lewis Galantière

 had it in word first as well and I had paragraphs and indentations, but for some reason they didn't go in. :( If I was you I would copy and paste it into teenink like you had planned, but go back a re-indent things. Good luck!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:08 am
StonerChick SILVER, Frankenmuth, Michigan
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Its a dog eat dog world and we're all wearing bacon undearwear

did you indent your paragraphs and it didn't post it that way? 

because im writing something in Word and i post it into the boxs..and it shows the indents but i don't wanna post it and have it not turn out like that


on Mar. 9 2011 at 12:41 pm
Your_Beautiful_Lies SILVER, Cairo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Expirence is a brutal teacher, but we learn. My God do we learn."~C.S.Lewis








OR
What saves a man is to take a step. Then another step. It is always the same step, but you have to take it. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, Wind, Sand and Stars, 1939, translated from French by Lewis Galantière

Oh god. Co me up with my own story? O.o I don't know if I could do it, i can try if you wish. :) Hahah I love your story SuperNOVA! 

on Jan. 29 2011 at 1:43 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

This was cool, I'd like to see what you can come up with your own material (i.e. a non fan-fic novel).

 

Please check out my novel SuperNOVA and let me know what you think!



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