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Omega (Section Two)
Summary: The continuation of the adventure of Elijah, Cameron, Alec, Chris, and all the others of Omega.
In this section, Elijah and the others discover the full effects of the storm.
In this section, Elijah and the others discover the full effects of the storm.
readaholic
Again, I like the idea, but I think it just needs...MORE. You never explain the ambrosia (unless you do later) and there's other stuff that really just needed to be explained. You have this great idea, but I think you need to let the audience in on a few of the minor (but necessary) details.
((oh, and sorry, I meant to give it four stars :S oops. Why does it sometimes ask to submit, and sometimes it does it right away?!?))
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