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Sylvia W.

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andromeda13 said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 4:42 pm
I liked the story, the way you wrote it was rushed, you should have spent more time explaining things. All of the exiting parts were over too quickly. 
swcricket98 replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 5:18 pm
Haha, thanks :) I wrote it when I was like 8 so I definitely could have used more practice.

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