Target

Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:58 am
Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:41 am
Hm... if the woman pronounces her w's as v's, shouldn't she pronounce her th's as z's?
By the way, I was hooked from the first page :)
Like charmiypiggy said, the story DID go a little faster then what i was used to, but i really enjoyed reading it!! There are SOME things you could fix, like in the flashback, you could make the flashback one lone paragraph. Even though i could tell it was a flashback (and an interesting one at that) you could use past tenses and stuff like that, to really set the scene...........But eventually i did get caught up in the story and the adventure and the romance.
But why was Bernice... (more »)
yes, i knew Bernice was a Russian spy :) It reminds me of the movie Salt!
And thanks, that really clears it up!!
Now i kinda feel bad for the guy with the package. All because it was given to him, he's gotta be killed!
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