The Reaper

December 8, 2010
By We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
We-R-3 BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
1 article 0 photos 344 comments

Favorite Quote:
A picture is worth a thousand words, however it takes a real artist to turn words into pictures.

Have you heard about the new Lebron Iphone, you have to set it on vibrate because it doesn't have any rings


Summary:

When Julie was killed by the king of Adenia, revenge was the first thing on his mind. Now twelve years later, his chance will set events in motion that cannot be stopped.


William R.

The Reaper


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This book has 9 comments.


on Apr. 3 2012 at 12:42 am
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
10 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

OMFG, Will!!! Frickin amazing!!! I worship your writing!!!

on Oct. 27 2011 at 8:46 pm
Xella714 BRONZE, Salem, Massachusetts
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments
I like it, though the dialogue is rough and unrealistic.

on Oct. 19 2011 at 3:49 pm
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
6 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.

OMG...... that was the best book I've ever read. and i read alot of books.

on Sep. 4 2011 at 6:19 pm
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
10 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

hey, i love your story!!! pleas check your email and tell annmarie to do the same thing!!!!

on Aug. 12 2011 at 8:21 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

wow! double wow! fabulous story i can see why it is #1! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment i would like some feedback from fellow writers! thanks so much!

Thorn BRONZE said...
on Dec. 23 2010 at 7:41 pm
Thorn BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 100 comments
*very well written.

Thorn BRONZE said...
on Dec. 23 2010 at 7:40 pm
Thorn BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 100 comments

Grr! My computer's not letting me read past the first page.

 

On a happier note, my comment:

 

So, this was amazing! Very well writter, and definitely drew me into the storyline.

There are a few itty-bitty things I'd like to mention.

First of all, there were numerous punctuation errors, but those can easily be fixed.

The second thing that had me confused is when the Isabella/Frederyk thing actually started. I'm reading and all of a sudden Isabella loves Frederyk. Maybe I missed some background info, but this confuses me a little.

 

The third thing that annoyed me was that it was amazing. You're so talented, and you don't think highly enough of yourself.

 

Extremely great job, and I can't wait to convince my computer to let me read the rest.

:) <3


on Dec. 17 2010 at 7:50 am
I love the plot it was enough to keep me reading. I would love to see more chapters.

on Dec. 13 2010 at 7:24 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Lexie is the first to comment.  WHAT.

 

I believe you already know my opinion of this book;D I'll let the rating speak for itself.





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