Heavenly

June 8, 2013
By MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Summary:

Lucy is torn between the tribe she should be loyal to, her family, and the tribe she is loyal to, their enemies and the people that she loves. When the gods get involved, Lucy knows that she is going to need every force possible to prevent her family and friends from killing each other and killing her love.


Madi B.

Heavenly


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on Aug. 11 2013 at 12:35 am
Raphyhan0101 BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
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Hey this is great! you should make more of these amazing Novels!

MadisHeart said...
on Aug. 10 2013 at 8:35 pm
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Cool, thanks!

on Aug. 10 2013 at 2:42 pm
CurlyGirl17 SILVER, Corydon, Indiana
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I didn't know if there was a way to contact you other than posting on your discussion page, but I just wanted to let you know I've posted the rest of my story, Metalligirl. I'd really appreciate your feedback; you did a great job on your story! :)

MadisHeart said...
on Jul. 18 2013 at 5:36 pm
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Glad to hear it! :)

Writ3r7 said...
on Jul. 18 2013 at 2:54 am
Writ3r7, Davis, California
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Love this! Way to go!!!

on Jul. 4 2013 at 12:58 pm
CurlyGirl17 SILVER, Corydon, Indiana
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This story is really captivating! I want to read more! You do a great job describing the setting and the characters. I was a little confused when I picked up on modern, American things in the Hawaiian tribes, but it's still a fantastic story. Keep up the good work! :)

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2013 at 3:50 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
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LOL. KEEP WRITING THSES AMAZING STORIES AND KEEP ME INFORMED!! :D

MadisHeart said...
on Jun. 29 2013 at 4:34 pm
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Thanks for your comments! I appreciate it :)

MadisHeart said...
on Jun. 29 2013 at 4:33 pm
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Haha wow, best comment ever! <3

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 11:46 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
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OMG!! A JAW-DROPPING STORY!!! LUCY IS SUCH A GREAT CHARACTER IN THE STORY!!! SHE PLACES SO MUCH TENSION AND EMOTION INTO THIS STORY!!! PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUEL TO THIS AMAZING BOOK!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING, MADISHEART!!!

on Jun. 28 2013 at 11:19 pm
Elphabalover72, North Ridge, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People are going to bitch about me anyway so I might as well give them something to bitch about," Helena Bonham Carter.

Oh and sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I've been away.

on Jun. 28 2013 at 11:18 pm
Elphabalover72, North Ridge, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People are going to bitch about me anyway so I might as well give them something to bitch about," Helena Bonham Carter.

This is really amazing and it has a really good hook. I like that some of my favorite names in here: like Lucky and Lydia. Well done:D

MadisHeart said...
on Jun. 28 2013 at 1:09 pm
MadisHeart, Norman, Oklahoma
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Thank you!!

on Jun. 28 2013 at 2:03 am
IrishRed BRONZE, Thayne, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
We all bleed the same color!

Wow,     amazing story     

Full House said...
on Jun. 27 2013 at 5:39 pm
Wow! This is really good. You are a creative writer with great descriptive language. Can't wait to read more.




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