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The Story of Ivy Hayes

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The Story of Ivy Hayes
Summary: Ivy Hayes was a killer. She didn't do love.
She didn't believe that there was anyone who could soften her steel heart. So far, she had been right. But then she met Addison.
One of the fallen angels Ivy so viciously hunted, Addison was sly, but still weak enough that Ivy could manipulate him however she liked. She would admit that she was attracted to him, but anything she felt was nothing other than pity. Sympathy, maybe.
Besides, Ivy had already arranged to marry Nathan Delany, a fellow Hunter from England. His heart was a cold as hers, and they made a ruthless pair. Ivy even liked Nate a little bit. But love was out of the question. She had been hurt one too many times, and there was a more important prize for Ivy to focus on: the death of her sister's murder, Maverick.
Addison doesn't want to hurt Ivy, though. He just wants to gain his wings back and earn his right to Ascension. But first, he wants to change Ivy, to show her that there's still good in the world. Will he succeed, or will his dark connection to Maverick hold Ivy back?





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lucybrownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 18 at 3:32 pm:
First off, I love the idea you have here.  I like Ivy; from what I’ve read so far she seems like a well developed character.   Her relationship with Nate is interesting (how they can’t really trust each other but pretend like they do and how they’re more business partners than a couple)  The fact that she doesn’t love and focuses on killing is a very captivating concept and it made me curious to know more about her and what she does.  Suggestions-... (more »)
 
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In_Love_with_WritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9 at 10:21 am:
Wow. Just wow. Great job!!!!!
 
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thegoldenllamaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2012 at 8:55 pm:
Moving! Deep! This is really amazing, the plot is really powerful and i love the characters! It is really unique with the angels and everything :) Great job! Oh oh and some ideas for the title...hmmm...Falling? The Regain? Sorry! I am not so good with titles!! XD but hope this helps!
 
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ShannonLil99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 10:13 am:
Very nice :) It was incredible, one of the best pieces I've read. There was good description in the and I really like it x
 
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Esperanza said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 5:45 am:
O my goodness this was soooooo good your such a descriptive writer...i rated it 5 stars....and i couldn't stop reading it...not only was the message really powerful but your word choice was incredible; I seriously felt like i was reading a novel written by a professional just only one comment though try not to repeat verbs as much i noticed that you use "donning/donned" a lot but besides that I really have no room to criticize bc it was really good and deserved the 5 stars
 
AthenaMarisaDeterminedbyFateThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 21, 2012 at 3:50 pm :
This is really brilliant! My only advice would be to maybe give more information about the Fallen Angels, but this really is a great story! I could not stop reading it :)
 
IttyBittyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 7:50 pm :
Nice story keep writing!
 
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