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Come in with the Raine

July 28, 2012
By Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

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Summary:

Raine Primsing knew something was wrong the day the accident occurred, she knew she should have taken the route Adam suggested to get home that day. She knew she should have stayed after school to talk to her geometry teacher about finishing her test that day. But she didn't. And now the full effect of her choice to ignore her instincts are finally beginning to set in. The outcome of the choice now has Raine accused of a murder that only she and her best friend Adam know she didn't commit. But it's their word against everybody else's and when the jury arrives with its ruling, there's no way of realistically clearing her name anymore. The only answer for her now is to escape... if she can even do that...

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Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 1 2012 at 1:12 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

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holy...! incred! five stars, baby! i couldnt stop at the first two chapters...read four!! :)
Allicat001 SILVER said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 7:40 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

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Thank you so much! :)  You are a very talented writer as well.
jmac1780 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2012 at 6:15 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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check*                   
jmac1780 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2012 at 6:14 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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wow you're a great writer! I'll be sure to chek out more of your work! :) Never stop writing, you have TRUE TALENT.  xoxo
Allicat001 SILVER said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 9:06 am
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

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Lol, thank you guys so much!  I really appreciate the feedback :)
KatelynnGilbert0 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2012 at 8:05 pm
KatelynnGilbert0 BRONZE, Palm Desert, California
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BWHPDNEM!!!! That was you BLOWING MY MIND! Like holy bejesus that was good, so good I can't wait to read the whole book. Keep up the good work.
elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 7:07 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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Really nice job! It's obvious that you're a talented writer, the description and style were very good. The only thing I would change is maybe make a few main points a bit clearer, like why Raine is so anxious or who exactly Adam is (her best friend? her friend/crush?), but overall I really liked this story. Would you mind maybe reading/commenting on my story Homeless? Thanks! :)
DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 6:22 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

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Allica....ohmg this is really good. I like how it's written into different point of views. Your really good writer. I take that The Raine girl has some issues or problems. Anyways your intro was awesome. Great job!!! Please write more