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Finish Line

Rocky start, sprint ahead, heavy breathing, halfway there.
Legs burning, heart thumping, arms pumping, almost there.
Glance left, then right, energy is declining, your right there.
One more step, and then you will be past...The Finish Line.



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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 5:41 pm:
Good job! :)
 
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Symba This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 7:26 pm:
!!!! Awesome
 
PurpleOreo replied...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 12:06 pm :
Glad you enjoyed it!
 
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