Biking Mountaintops

August 28, 2009
By Noah Gottlieb SILVER, Park City, Utah
Noah Gottlieb SILVER, Park City, Utah
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The breeze,
the trees,
only nature surrounds.
For some a pastime
to others the event of a lifetime.

No clouds on the horizon
nothing to ruin my day.
A group of butterflies dancing,
around the flowers they play.
Daisies, Marigolds, Sunflowers alike
all part of nature, like me on my bike.


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mcelronej said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 7:02 am
I like how you did this topic in a form of a poem. I can relate to your event, because i have mountain biked once or twice. It is such a blast. Looking at the beauty of nature, and it going past you. I think you can be more describtive though, because when you are up there describe the view. You the trees, maybe describe the colors of the leaves. What time of day you did this at, because you say on the horizon. What did the horizon look like, was it a fiery orange and a ruby red when the sun goes down or comes up. I liked the poem though it was a great way to describe mountain biking.


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