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The ocean is endless. Between the hazy, undefined line of the never ending horizon, and the muted tan sand that makes up the beach, the waves rise and fall with unrelenting fervor. One or two gnarled rocks rise from the blue-grey water about a hundred yards from the shoreline, but after them, there is nothing to break the swells. Every few seconds, waves crash over these rocks, the white foam at the forefront of the curling tide, devouring the stark black like a hungry animal, or attacking it like the foot soldiers of an immense, unstoppable army of surging water. When it recedes, giving the weary rock an infinitesimal relapse, ocean spray peels off of the rough, mussel adorned surface, helped by the blowing wind.
Dimly recognizable is the line where the ocean meets the sky; the harsh, steel blue fades into soft white and grey and you realize you can no longer see the dancing whitecaps. In an instant, the scene changes and the clouds pour rain into the roiling expanse. A fog obscures the horizon further as the white hanging behemoths dip to skim the moving surface. With one more blink comes another change and the vast waves take on a green hue.
It is said that hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn. The ocean is another matter entirely. The undulating, roaring waves threaten to engulf anything and everything it its path. Turn your back on her waters for a moment and she may sweep your legs from under you without a care, her tide pulling you from the safety of the sand to the uncertain, murky, turbidity of her embrace. The almighty power in the sluices of the deep commands unwavering respect. Betray that reverence, and, like a candle in an unforgiving wind, not even one second will separate you from being extinguished forever.




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singergurl12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 12:47 pm:
haha well its about a month since i first commented- and apparantly this is just one of those things that gets better with time. The imagery grabs me and hooks me through it. This actually reminds me a lot of one of my favorite peices by Emily Dickinson about the ocean- I'll find the name if i can. Keep writing- love it ;)
 
iDogrocker replied...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 6:30 pm :
Thanks for taking another look at it! I'm aware it's not my best work, but I took a chance on vacation to break out of my norms, and I surprised myself with how much I enjoyed it. I'm glad it seems to get better as you read it again :D
 
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singergurl12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 2:20 pm:
not one of your best works to me... excellent writing, an 11 out of 10. ive just gotten used to seeing 15. it just didnt grab me, leap out and say "HEY LOOKIT". then i got to the last paragraph... its just my opinion but that is where it goes back up to your usual above, beyond, and over the rainbow work. great jo!
 
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GreenEyedGirl14 said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 10:31 pm:
This screamed that you are a wonderful author!! Great job. The vocabulary pulls the reader in, and the imagery was amazing. This is now one of my favorite pieces on teenink!
 
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inherownlittleworld This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:46 pm:
this was amazing writing. as robert frost says "no tears in the writer, no tears in the reader" i felt like i was walking with you along the beach. have you tried turning this into a poem? it would be amazing.
 
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JessieBecker said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 11:15 pm:
this is really good(: you're very descriptive, and I really enjoyed reading you're work(:
 
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a.m.f said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 9:40 pm:
You have a way with words! This is great! I love how vivid it is! :)
 
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DemonXxXchild903 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
Fantastic! I feel like I was there! This is a very good skill to have in writing!
 
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