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The First Cut is the Deepest

May 10, 2010
By ChocolateBliss SILVER, Mount Vernon, New York
ChocolateBliss SILVER, Mount Vernon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Time heals everything..."


He says she's the only
And she says he's the first
In her mind this is not a movie, there are no lines to rehearse.
She hopes for the best but prepares for the worst..
What if he leaves again?
Thats when she'd realized she's cursed.
What will be the next escuse she tells her friends?
Not that she's on a "New Trend"...again?
For now he assures her he'll be here, and most definitely care
All she can do lye in his arms and resist introducing her eye lids for down her cheek will appear a tear.


The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this piece, is from a recent experience. From this on and off dilema its hard for me to depend on others...because of the nightmares of them leaving me, which i encountered in reality.

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on May. 25 2010 at 6:14 pm
ChocolateBliss SILVER, Mount Vernon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Time heals everything..."

Thank you !!! i really appreciate it. check out my others.. [Defense MECHANISM, WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO?, IS MY CONFIDENCE A CRIME?] =)

ally17 BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2010 at 7:24 pm
ally17 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."

WOW! This really spoke to me with such a powerful force. You have great word choice and I really feel like I can understand how you feel! Keep writing! :)