Left out and Lonely

April 21, 2010
By faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.


I looked out the window. Rain was pouring outside. I watched the rain slowly stream down to the bottom of the window, similar to my tears running down my solemn face. When I got that text from my best friend Amanda saying that she was moving in two weeks. I caller her after a while. We were to emotional to talk. The pain and lonliness I felt was beyond anything I've ever experienced. No one understood my predicament. I was losing my best friend. The one person I could talk to about anything. The one person who had my back and I could confide to. The one person I thought I would never use. I had her and she had me, and then I didn't have anything. Sure I have other friends but the closeness I felt with her can never be replaced. No one understands how much I miss her. I wish i could see her, but its so hard. I have emptiness in my life without her.


The author's comments:
I wrote this because she was my best friend and I cant go on without her. Its so hard sometimes.Anyone who has lost a friend would understand.

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nnc97 said...
on May. 21 2011 at 10:21 am
i realli understand...my bestfriend just moved....i feel as if theres no one left in which i can actually tell everything to or someone who is always there as a support system.....she cant be replaced

on Jun. 1 2010 at 7:29 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

ohh ok now i get it

on May. 27 2010 at 8:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

push yourself captain, read it againly.

on May. 27 2010 at 4:01 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

im confuzzled

on May. 26 2010 at 6:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

if you didnt unleash the name, nobody would know they were evil. it would be like, "oh youre here to kill me? i didnt know you were evil. youre who? I've never heard of that. are you sure youre one of the bad guys?"...

on May. 26 2010 at 6:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

never mind that, she made me make her captain. your very much welcomness.

on May. 26 2010 at 6:12 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

get on facebook! lol whoops i unleashed the name of my evil dominion

Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 12:36 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

lol you have a pt there, i guess... hey, thanks for the comment on my poem!!

on May. 26 2010 at 5:59 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

happens all the time...

on May. 25 2010 at 2:37 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

lmao that didnt sound right

on May. 25 2010 at 2:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well then, jump aboard my ship and I will....oh wait, never mind.

on May. 24 2010 at 9:33 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

i should be your main captain though haha ;)

on May. 21 2010 at 10:49 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

shes not really the captain you know. if i comment on 123 poems this afternoon, there will be 123 captains. there cannot be 123 captains.

Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 8:10 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

wow, this is really good! i could tell how sad and lonely you were, you described it really well... good job, "captain"!!

on May. 20 2010 at 8:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I'd tell you how much i like this piece (or peice whatever) and all the emotion you put into to it but that would imply that I like your loneliness. I dont like your loneliness i just like how good you write when youre lonely. i wish i could unlonely you. 5 stars captain.


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