I Want

March 6, 2010
By cassielyn3 BRONZE, Shirley, Massachusetts
cassielyn3 BRONZE, Shirley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream ~ Edgar Allen Poe


I want my arthtritic hands to form in the open space between your fingers. Holding hands with a perfect fit. I want to scream at the top of my lungs and cause another scene. Making sure I get all of your attention. I want to kiss those lips until we forget how to. And have to start back to the beginning. I want to open up your mind. Choosing to see the world in your view. I want to memorize the color of your eyes. And be able to draw them over and over until they're mine. I want to show you how much love I have. Making sure you get every inch of it. I want to blow air into your lungs. Just to give you my breath. I want to cry in your arms. As you cleanse me of my sins. I want you. I want you. I want you. And me, together forever.



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on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:39 pm
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS GOLD, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion. I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Have a lovely evening :)

on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:23 pm
cassielyn3 BRONZE, Shirley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream ~ Edgar Allen Poe

Then I won't.

on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:07 pm
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS GOLD, Brentwood, Tennessee
11 articles 4 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion. I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Absolutely no one. And don't worry about it.

on Mar. 15 2010 at 3:51 pm
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS GOLD, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion. I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Quite a stiff conversation this has been...

on Mar. 14 2010 at 5:45 pm
cassielyn3 BRONZE, Shirley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream ~ Edgar Allen Poe

Oh, well no...that wasn't exactly the point I was trying to put out with my writing. Anyways, I'm sorry I got defensive. Have a nice day.

on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:40 pm
No, I don't say things for pity. I was explaining why I asked, I don't know other teens with arthritis. So I automaticly thought "oh how cool! Someone who has it!"

on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:19 am
Oooops,

Sorry, having arthritis I never think of it as a symbol of aging. Haha

on Mar. 13 2010 at 10:32 pm
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS GOLD, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion. I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

hahahaha wow.

on Mar. 12 2010 at 6:03 pm
cassielyn3 BRONZE, Shirley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream ~ Edgar Allen Poe

its a metaphor for getting old together.

RebelAnjewel said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 7:10 pm
RebelAnjewel, Williamsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Love is familiar. Love is a devil. There is no evil angel but love.~Shakespear

hello. I love your piece. Do you have arthritis?


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