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I Want

I want my arthtritic hands to form in the open space between your fingers. Holding hands with a perfect fit. I want to scream at the top of my lungs and cause another scene. Making sure I get all of your attention. I want to kiss those lips until we forget how to. And have to start back to the beginning. I want to open up your mind. Choosing to see the world in your view. I want to memorize the color of your eyes. And be able to draw them over and over until they're mine. I want to show you how much love I have. Making sure you get every inch of it. I want to blow air into your lungs. Just to give you my breath. I want to cry in your arms. As you cleanse me of my sins. I want you. I want you. I want you. And me, together forever.





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Victoria L. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:10 pm
hello. I love your piece. Do you have arthritis?
 
xocassie247xo replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 6:03 pm
its a metaphor for getting old together.
 
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 10:32 pm
hahahaha wow.
 
Rebelanjewel replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:19 am
Oooops,
Sorry, having arthritis I never think of it as a symbol of aging. Haha
 
Rebelanjewel replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 1:40 pm
No, I don't say things for pity. I was explaining why I asked, I don't know other teens with arthritis. So I automaticly thought "oh how cool! Someone who has it!"
 
xocassie247xo replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 5:45 pm
Oh, well no...that wasn't exactly the point I was trying to put out with my writing. Anyways, I'm sorry I got defensive. Have a nice day.
 
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 3:51 pm
Quite a stiff conversation this has been...
 
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 8:07 pm
Absolutely no one. And don't worry about it.
 
xocassie247xo replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 8:23 pm
Then I won't.
 
jOjOsfreakingCIRCUS replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 8:39 pm
Have a lovely evening :)
 
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