Reality

January 19, 2010
By falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Getr done!
larry the cable guy


Every morning, it's all the same. I put on my mask before leaving to school. It's the type of mask that hides everything. My thoughts and feelings, and even better, it's the type of mask that says everythings perfect. But thenthere are those who are able to see right through my mask. Theylook me in the eyes. My lying eyes, and ask questions. The type i'd rather not answer. "You ok? Tough week?" I look at them, avoiding their eyes and lie to them. "No, just tired." i lie to them daily, but they know better. the more i feed them the same lie, the more they hesitate to believe me. i get uncomfortable when i'm aroughd them or when they talk to me. i suddenly have this incompetency to move or talk right- afraid that what ever i say next could be the TRUTH and it's funny, because although i am so uncomfortable around them, i have this type of obsession. this wanting to know where they are every second of the day. this wanting to know what they think, of me of others. i want to know if i'm loved like they are. but whats the point if nobody cares???
DONE


The author's comments:
just be careful about what you do and/or say to people. you may never know how bad you could hurt someone with such a small comment. a comment that could change someones life.

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on Jul. 2 2010 at 9:08 pm
Heathurrlovesyouu SILVER, Morristown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing of me is original, I am the combined effort of everyone I have ever known." -Invisible Monsters

I love the "I'm just tired," line. That's the one I always use. You'll go far if you can relate to your audience that way! :)

on May. 12 2010 at 2:39 pm
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Getr done!
larry the cable guy

thanks for actually looking me up, normally when i say that it's hopeful i don't actually expect anything. So thanks for that it really made my day to hear a comment about my poems. THanks, let me know about anything you'd like me to see.

TheRealMe GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 12:15 pm
TheRealMe GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
I know who i am, and i know who i want to be.

This is an amazing poem i really l;iked it. THanks for commenting my poem. And you should check out my other stuff:)

on Feb. 21 2010 at 10:26 pm
Bambi3226 SILVER, Grants, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is temporary. It may last a minute, or an hour, or a day, or a year, but eventually it will subside and something else will take its place. If I quit, however, it lasts forever." - Lance Armstrong

um ya search for grants, nm and you'll find three anonymous by me

on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:27 pm
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Getr done!
larry the cable guy

any new things?

on Feb. 9 2010 at 5:39 pm
Bambi3226 SILVER, Grants, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is temporary. It may last a minute, or an hour, or a day, or a year, but eventually it will subside and something else will take its place. If I quit, however, it lasts forever." - Lance Armstrong

ok then...whatever you say...

on Feb. 9 2010 at 2:17 pm
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Getr done!
larry the cable guy

I love you sooo much, kisses and hugs ammo (amorette) your obsession =)

on Feb. 7 2010 at 9:53 pm
Bambi3226 SILVER, Grants, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is temporary. It may last a minute, or an hour, or a day, or a year, but eventually it will subside and something else will take its place. If I quit, however, it lasts forever." - Lance Armstrong

Well, actually, Ammo, this is my fav piece of yours...

Bambi said...
on Feb. 7 2010 at 7:13 pm
Go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!B's and Ammo forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:46 pm
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Getr done!
larry the cable guy

Let Me know if you liky he he:)


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