Tunnel of Lies

May 16, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


She is clouded by tears. She is scared to turn around because she is scared to find what's behind her. All the things peoples' told her she thought was the truth, but now she finds herself covered by lies. The pain of this is breaking her to the ice floor. Her writings she writes goes into a nightmare, all the shine leaves and turns them into dark stories; her life is ruining before everyone's eyes.

People stealing her ideas behind her back; her writing career is getting stolen. But she is too hurt to notice this right before her eyes. This misery is driving her insane, but it doesn't show because she is clouded by tears. The fog starts to take over her life as she wonders deeper into the tunnel of lies.


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on Mar. 6 2012 at 9:10 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Haha..Lol..:)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 9:08 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

haha,no prob. :)

 


on Mar. 6 2012 at 8:12 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awe, thanks Toran! I've never had anyone tell me that before!:D

on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:39 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awe, thanks Toran;) Im glad you look up to us. I've never had anyone tell me that before:)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:13 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Isn't it strange how we all feel the same about all kinds of things. We are open with ideas, thogh sometimes a bit protective of ourselves. And only because of all we have been through. I also learn something new from you two. I look up to you both. :)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:13 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Isn't it strange how we all feel the same about all kinds of things. We are open with ideas, thogh sometimes a bit protective of ourselves. And only because of all we have been through. I also learn something new from you two. I look up to you both. :)

on Feb. 10 2012 at 7:32 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I learn something about you every time I talk to you..I feel the same way about liers. Which the story probably can tell you that...

on Feb. 9 2012 at 11:13 am
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

I know the feeling. I did something to one of my friends because I found out that he had been lying to me for the past year right to my face. I've never been able to forgive myself for it but it was well deserved. I have no patience for people that lie to save their own skin.


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