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Golden Tint

February 19, 2010
By Anonymous

I rushed down the stairs skipping every other one. My feet up high and my hands shaking back and forth above my head. It didn't matter how fast I got there or where I was going for that matter but where I am now. I was moving, soaring nearly, my feet caressed the ground in a swift movement. Its for me, its for me, its for me I keep telling myself. I am almost there, so close my hand could reach and grab it. The golden egg was there. The light hit it just right. It was brilliant and my dream. My dream to open the edges and find my love. My love, oh my love, I would find. I began to peel back the aluminum with my tiny fragile fingers. It made the most beautiful sound crinkling in my clutch. The golden tint shown off the windows into the room making the kitchen appear as if magic. Bibbity- bobbity- boo and all was still for the golden tint. Oh my love, my love, my only love the golden easter egg with the brilliance that makes me curious.



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on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:23 pm
monkeegirl007 BRONZE, Farmingdale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Put a smile on your face, because the day ain't over yet."

Thanks everyone for the comments

kitch said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:19 pm
always remember the excitement and passion you have - you are a shining star

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:22 pm
monkeegirl007 BRONZE, Farmingdale, New York
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Put a smile on your face, because the day ain't over yet."

That was really good

Angel29girl said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:02 pm
Beautiful poem!! simbol of your beautiful dreams of a sensitive and intelligent teenager. Is very, very good. I would rated A+

grammy said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 8:23 pm
thought it was an adorable short story,

she surely must be thinking of Easter &

all the fun involved

65Sally said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 12:47 pm
Very descriptive and well written.

Andrea said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 7:10 am
I am shocked this was written by a teen. It's so well written and very mature. Great poem.

Bpiper said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 7:09 am
Geez, can't wait till easter now. Excellent short story.

racecar07 said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:45 am
Caeley I loved your poem, It was soooo great!

chrislooney said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 6:00 am
great poem

andelo said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 10:19 pm
A well written very descriptive article, just loved it!!

dollar said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:37 pm
excellent use of words to create the image