Rain Dance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


We hurriedoutside
Clad only in our bathing suits.
With the first drops ofrain,
We gasped in anticipated shock.

Harder and harder thewater splattered
Faster and faster we twirled.
As we whippedaround in crazy circles,
The ground and sky melted into a grayblur.

There, in our backyard,
Time stopped for aninstant.
Only aware of the hazy curtain,
We left the world

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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kzimblis said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:32 am
I liked how it was a very descriptive parts and the nice vocab.
 
poptart said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:26 am
I really liked the poem, nice!
 
pillow pet replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:31 am

get a pillow pet today

 

 
LetLoveLive replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 5:38 pm
pillowpet who cares?
 
RockGirl182 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 6:37 am
this was trully beautiful !
 
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