Rain Dance MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

We hurriedoutside
Clad only in our bathing suits.
With the first drops ofrain,
We gasped in anticipated shock.

Harder and harder thewater splattered
Faster and faster we twirled.
As we whippedaround in crazy circles,
The ground and sky melted into a grayblur.

There, in our backyard,
Time stopped for aninstant.
Only aware of the hazy curtain,
We left the world

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i love this so much!

LetLoveLive said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:38 pm
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kzimblis said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:32 am
I liked how it was a very descriptive parts and the nice vocab.

pillow pet said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:31 am

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poptart said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:26 am
I really liked the poem, nice!

on Mar. 15 2011 at 6:37 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
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"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

this was trully beautiful !


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