i need you

November 6, 2008
By nichole ramos, Dallas, TX

i crawl up in a ball, not knowing when im about to fall, my true love isent here, i scream and cry with heavy fear. I dont know how he feels, i dont know what is real, my hand holding cold air. I cant bare, i need his touch, i need him so much. Im clustering inside, im praying every night, what would i do without him, its like theres a camera with no film its empty, hallow. Its cold air with shadows. i miss you so much, my love please come home to me after you leave the army...

The author's comments:
dear guys, well im the awesome cheerleader here at sunset high!! i hope you like my poem, i made it for my love in the army!!=]

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