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Cobblestones

November 10, 2014
By Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"


It’s the lack of interim darkened stains on the cobblestones that makes me pause. Where the rest are muddied and damp from the past rainfall, the solitary patch of lightened stone stands alone against the bleak backdrop. Even with a dog urging me onwards and the whispers of the city around me, that solitary patch is enough to make me take a weary glance upwards.


The man matches my gaze with wide eyes, warming instantly with a meek smile. Wrinkles trace a maze through his skin, a frail hand propping up a tattered umbrella overhead. Fitted in a heavy coat and an instrument case clenched in tight fingers, his poise holds a leaden weight equally balanced by his bright eyes. I only return the smile before taking a step away.


My dog has other ideas, quickly finding the stranger and sniffing at the ends of his coat. I tug at the leash, but the collie is determined and doesn’t so much as blink at my urgency.


“No, no,” the man says in a nearly inaudible whisper, “that’s quite alright.”
Persistent, I continue to attempt leading my collie away from the stranger, but she plants her paws into the stone sidewalk and looks up at the man expectantly. The leash dangles tensely between us, and I look to the man with an apologetic grimace.


A wide smile lightens the man’s features, causing his eyes to crinkle at the edges. “Dogs have a good sense of who to trust. More than people do,” he says, rubbing the collie’s head with stiff fingers. “You’ve got be careful in a city like this, teeming with strangers and artists and imagination. Dangerous thing, imagination.”


It takes me a moment to realize that he is laughing. Stiffening, I glance around for an escape, but only bleak cobblestones and lonely storefronts answer my plea.


The man shakes his head, patting the collie and taking a small step backwards. Looking at the dog fondly, he slowly closes the tattered umbrella and tucks it under his arm with lethargic movements. “You know what imagination lead to? Ideas. Then progress, and change. You never know what you’re going to get with change.” He winks at me. “Dangerous.”


Lips pursed, I give a hurried nod of agreement before pulling my collie to my side. This time she comes, tail wagging, and I relax slightly.


“Imagination can also lead to creativity. Art, music. Beauty. Now is that so dangerous?” His eyes lock with mine, their warmth dissipated and replaced with a transparent sincerity. “Is beauty dangerous?”


Tightening the leash I duck my head and turn away from the stranger, eager to continue on my way. The man coughs weakly from behind, a deep and ragged cough that seems to echo in the empty street. For the slightest moment, I pause.


“It can be,” I say slowly, eyes averted and back facing the man, “if misused.”


Silence.


Glancing over my shoulder, I see the man hobbling away on the cobblestones, umbrella tucked under his arm. In a few moments, he turns the corner, leaving me staring down the gray street with narrowed eyes. Unmoving, a silence falls over me, as though expectant for his return.


It doesn’t come.


After a long quiet, a soft tug on the leash draws me out of my stupor. Wrapping my coat around myself, I blink, and glance after my collie. She sniffs at an instrument case, sitting alone in a patch of lightened cobblestone and the memory of its owner.


A frown dances on my lips, and I walk over to the case with warm hands. Carefully lifting the heavy lid, the sleek body of the violin provides deep contrast to the dim grays surrounding me. Pictures and clippings line the interior of the lid, spinning a new tale with each image I take in. A musty scent rises from the case, motes of dust dancing in the air as I run a finger over the edge of the instrument.


I close the case with gentle fingers and hold it firmly as I continue down the street. For a moment, I pause, glancing at the fading patch of lightened cobblestones. A soft smile touches my lips, and with the shake of my head, I walk away.



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on Aug. 2 2015 at 11:04 am
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

Thank you! (And again, my apologies for the late reply). I'm glad you liked it, and more so that having the old man not return came across as a good thing. Your enthusiasm is very encouraging. It means a lot to me that you have reviewed so much of my work. Know that I really do appreciate it, and your comments are very helpful!

Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2015 at 7:40 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Wow, what a beautiful story. I love the message, but I am truly impressed by the writing. Some of the phrases you use are just inspirational to me as a writer, such as "wrinkles trace a maze through his skin" and "motes of dust dancing in the air." You have a unique and gifted voice. By the way, I love that the old man doesn't come back when you're waiting for him. Thank you for not falling into the rut of predictability.

on Dec. 9 2014 at 4:07 pm
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

Thank you so much! I'm glad you appreciate my work, and for finding those grammatical/fluency errors. All too often I get used to the piece and completely miss the mistakes no matter how many times I look over them. It really helps that you pointed them out; thank you so much!

IMSteel BRONZE said...
on Dec. 8 2014 at 12:28 pm
IMSteel BRONZE, Wallhala, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Learn from Yesterday, live for Today, hope for Tomorrow" - Albert Einstein

"Brevity is the Soul of Wit" - The Which

Beautiful thoughts, and beautiful words to go along with them. I think you really know what it means to be a writer; it's simply the joy in writing down the thoughts and feelings in your head and in your heart, and turning them into art. Brilliant job, drew me in immediately. The very first sentence tripped me up a little, I'm not sure "the lack of interim dark ended stains," flows very well. Other than that, the only grammatical mistake I noticed was in the line: "you've got (to) be careful," you left out the "to." Great job and good luck!

on Nov. 24 2014 at 4:03 pm
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

Thank you! I have to say, it is a pretty random story, but out of it I've started to create the inklings of a storyline. Not sure where it will take me, but it's exciting as a writer nonetheless. Thank you so much for your comments! 

on Nov. 24 2014 at 4:01 pm
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

Thank you! I really appreicate your enthusiasm.

on Nov. 24 2014 at 4:00 pm
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

I can definitely see where you are coming from - the punch I mentioned was more that there is a lot contained in just a few words (if you care to look deeply). It really wasn't too clear; I'll work on that. Thank you so much for being honest and for your feedback! 

on Nov. 22 2014 at 9:27 pm
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
20 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.” ~Maya Angelou

I was drawn into this short piece, not sure of what would come next--there doesn't seem to be a plotline, or point to it, but it holds its own beauty all the same. It really seemed to touch me in some way--I can't quite describe it. You have amazing writing skills, I am envious! Keep it up!

on Nov. 22 2014 at 5:36 pm
reidaboutme SILVER, Alden, Kansas
9 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be nobody- but- yourself in a world which is doing it's best, night and day, to make you everybody else, means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."-ee cummings

You gave me this link to read and said it had a punch. I'm not sure what the punch is. Maybe make it more obvious? Other than that it was really good! Very despcriptive. You do a good job of showing and not telling. 

on Nov. 22 2014 at 5:04 pm
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lego ergo sum (Latin—I read, therefore, I am)
The pen is mightier than the sword—unknown
Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith, and in purity—1 Timothy 4:12

Wow. Simple, but eloquent and very thought-provoking. You paint an image in your reader's head, the kind where the more you look, the more you see. It forces them to think. Well done. Keep it up:)