April 10, 2017
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I found Reese Villazor’s poem Dreams moving. The beginning of the poem when he said “A dream is like a feather you spend your night chasing after one…” I found that moving it is also a good simile comparing the dream to a feather. The poem also says that you find out it was only a dream and you will sorely miss that dream. The dream was only a fantasy in your head and is also temporary and when that dream is over you wish it never did. The dream disappears in the sun like the poem said. The dream is only a fantasy and your imagination.

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ReCaViThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 27 at 5:33 pm
Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate it, and I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
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