Feedback: In the Beginning

February 17, 2009
By Christine Houska BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
Christine Houska BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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This article is very good. At the end though when she says she wishes it was still loud, that made me wonder. It makes me think, maybe her parents were getting a divorce or they were fighting. I think this article is very well written and she gets her point across well.


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