A Life Without Charms MAG

March 5, 2015
By Jasmine11 SILVER, Faridabad, Other
Jasmine11 SILVER, Faridabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Danger is real, but fear is a choice.


a knife without a Blade,
a fruit without Seeds,
a garden without Flowers,
a jam without Sugar,
a lady without Heels,
a pencil without Lead,
a pen without Ink,
a star without Shine,
a sword without a Hilt,
a king without Wealth,
a crown without Jewels,
Teen Ink without Writers –
such is a life without Charms.


The author's comments:

Love yourself and believe in yourself! This world can’t be without you because each one of us is special! 


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on Oct. 29 2016 at 9:48 am
gayatrielliot BRONZE, Delhi , Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The autumn leaves are a riot of color. They remind us of the good, colorful things, and their crunch beneath our shoes also bids adieu to all bad things that have long gone,"

Excellent. Check out my work as well

on Mar. 24 2016 at 1:57 am
Really cool...deserved to be in the magazine@_@

David3 said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 1:54 am
Love thisssssss;)

Samurai said...
on Mar. 24 2016 at 1:52 am
I love this!!!

on Feb. 17 2016 at 7:37 am
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

It is just very interesting. It explains life in a simple way. It isn't degrading at all Don't read into things.

Kirika GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2015 at 7:57 am
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

this is really nice ^^

waish SILVER said...
on Oct. 27 2015 at 6:54 am
waish SILVER, Ranchi, Other
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reaLLY like it

Arin said...
on Jun. 9 2015 at 5:43 pm
@MysticMusic the line you thought was funny, I found deeply offensive. The poem as a whole reminds me of something I wrote in second grade and doesn't strike me as something that deserves to be published. I don't understand this poem at all, but I think that this might be due to my own ignorance -- I have no idea what "Charms" are. Could someone explain to me what you like about it?

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 12:03 pm
David14, Faridabad, Other
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I look at people's work like you and I feel that there are still good young writers in the world............

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 12:01 pm
David14, Faridabad, Other
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It's a really good satire commenting on human behaviour. It's true that one should always be happy and optimistic despite the gravest of situations s/he has to confront. This is something that stays with one forever — his optimism. Really good work. Keep it up!

on May. 13 2015 at 11:47 am
This is a gr8 poem:)

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 10:36 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Lovely poem!!!!!!!!

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 10:35 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Ur writing style is beautifullll!!!!! and yes, it is, CHARM full!!!!!!!!!!

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 10:33 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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I love this too! Really CharmFULLL!!!!!!!!!!

David14 said...
on May. 13 2015 at 10:27 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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This is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!! Really deserved to be published in the magazine@_@

David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 11:54 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Beautiful!

David14 said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 9:06 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Really awesome poem! Reminds me of the song 'everything at once' by Lenka.

on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:46 am
Jasmine11 SILVER, Faridabad, Other
7 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
Danger is real, but fear is a choice.

I am so happy!!!

Pierre said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 5:51 am
I like it too and btw I loved your poems too Wizard13!

John said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 5:50 am
It's really funny!




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