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a knife without a Blade,
a fruit without Seeds,
a garden without Flowers,
a jam without Sugar,
a lady without Heels,
a pencil without Lead,
a pen without Ink,
a star without Shine,
a sword without a Hilt,
a king without Wealth,
a crown without Jewels,
Teen Ink without Writers –
such is a life without Charms.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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gayatrielliot said...
Oct. 29, 2016 at 9:48 am
Excellent. Check out my work as well
 
AwesomenessRevealed said...
Mar. 24, 2016 at 1:57 am
Really cool...deserved to be in the magazine@_@
 
David3 said...
Mar. 24, 2016 at 1:54 am
Love thisssssss;)
 
Samurai said...
Mar. 24, 2016 at 1:52 am
I love this!!!
 
KirikaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2015 at 7:57 am
this is really nice ^^
 
waish said...
Oct. 27, 2015 at 6:54 am
reaLLY like it
 
David14 said...
May 13, 2015 at 12:03 pm
I look at people's work like you and I feel that there are still good young writers in the world............
 
SweetCassidy said...
May 13, 2015 at 12:01 pm
It's a really good satire commenting on human behaviour. It's true that one should always be happy and optimistic despite the gravest of situations s/he has to confront. This is something that stays with one forever — his optimism. Really good work. Keep it up!
 
Harlequins said...
May 13, 2015 at 11:47 am
This is a gr8 poem:)
 
Jany12 said...
May 13, 2015 at 10:36 am
Lovely poem!!!!!!!!
 
WittyCat said...
May 13, 2015 at 10:35 am
Ur writing style is beautifullll!!!!! and yes, it is, CHARM full!!!!!!!!!!
 
IKNOwiT said...
May 13, 2015 at 10:33 am
I love this too! Really CharmFULLL!!!!!!!!!!
 
BeautySaysIt said...
May 13, 2015 at 10:27 am
This is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!! Really deserved to be published in the magazine@_@
 
Sandy18 said...
Mar. 11, 2015 at 9:06 am
Really awesome poem! Reminds me of the song 'everything at once' by Lenka.
 
Wizard13 said...
Mar. 7, 2015 at 4:32 am
It's so sweet and cute! I really love it! Congrats for getting the editor's choice award:)
 
Pierre replied...
Mar. 9, 2015 at 5:51 am
I like it too and btw I loved your poems too Wizard13!
 
SpiderWoman said...
Mar. 7, 2015 at 4:23 am
The poem's really funny! It really deserves being on the front page! Good job!
 
Jasmine11 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 11, 2015 at 8:46 am
I am so happy!!!
 
Herosanah replied...
Mar. 13, 2015 at 11:54 am
Beautiful!
 
Leajade9 said...
Mar. 6, 2015 at 12:05 pm
Wow! This is true talent! I'm in love with this. Keep it up! Like and comment on some of my poems.. tell me what you think (-; Thanks!
 
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