I found Ian's poem "Breath of Death" extremely moving because Ian used phenomonal imagery words that explained the "Breath of Death". When he said "My father just lay there, with oxygen face, skin soon to be blue, body covered with dew",it gave me that picture in my mind that his father was not well.This poem had me thinking out of my mind that it's a very discriptive poem and everyone should read it even teachers.This poem is one of the best poems i have ever read. Thank you Ian for a tremendous poem.
Breath of Death
February 20, 2008