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Feedback for "Not Another Success Story"

April 11, 2013
By NatalieZhu SILVER, New York, New York
NatalieZhu SILVER, New York, New York
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The article “Not Another Success Story” from the April issue is a relatable and emotional article written by Niagara P. In this anecdote, it describes how the author believes that she is the worst compared to everyone else due to her grades at school. The narrator stated that everyone else in her school score better than her no matter how difficult the test it. Later on, she realizes that mistakes may be valuable in life including hers.

I agree with the author that there are times where one may be worst than others in grades. However, this doesn’t mean that it is the end of the world. After all, mistakes are the first step to success. Instead of thinking them as trash, one should consider them as jewels. Errors help make someone grow and mature. I strongly believe that the author’s failures would eventually lead to victory. The key to life is the never give up no matter how many mistakes one makes.



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