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Recently, I read a poem on Teen Ink by an anonymous writer. The name of the poem was “You don’t live on my street”. What I liked about it was that it sounded more like a song. I also liked that the author wrote a little bit about his/her and how the author’s mom tries to sell him/her. The author explains how people don’t know him/her and what he’s been through, so the author says “you don’t live on my street” meaning that people don’t know him or they don’t live what he/she has lived and he’s been through.





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LaReSt This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 3:32 pm
Thank you so much! It's my poem
 
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