“You Don’t Live on my Street” Feedback

October 13, 2010
By Alfredo BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
Alfredo BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
What goes around comes around.


Recently, I read a poem on Teen Ink by an anonymous writer. The name of the poem was “You don’t live on my street”. What I liked about it was that it sounded more like a song. I also liked that the author wrote a little bit about his/her and how the author’s mom tries to sell him/her. The author explains how people don’t know him/her and what he’s been through, so the author says “you don’t live on my street” meaning that people don’t know him or they don’t live what he/she has lived and he’s been through.


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ToyRe GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 3:32 pm
ToyRe GOLD, Monterey, California
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Favorite Quote:
"This too shall pass." and " When God leads to a cliff, jump, because He'll either catch you or teach you how to fly."

Thank you so much! It's my poem


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