Feedback for “Inspiration” MAG

April 22, 2009
By lissili SILVER, New York City, New York
lissili SILVER, New York City, New York
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“Inspiration” by Kaylee J. is a beautiful piece. It is a ­wonderful metaphor written so convincingly that the reader wonders whether the author is truly describing a lover. The writing itself flows perfectly – poetry in motion, if you will.

I can absolutely relate to it: inspiration is like a fickle flirt. The piece describes a writer’s emotions flawlessly. The line “He comes and goes, leaving my notebooks full of erratic bursts of passion,” really caught my attention. Inspiration is a frustrating thing, but it’s spectacular all the same.

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