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Goku-Is-Ness posted this thread...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 11:05 am

((I wrote this before my Nana Passed away. I was in the waiting room of a hospital ICU))
Noisy,
Dull
Waiting room,
I sit here To learn about whom,
All alone,
With No one here,
Quiet,
Dull
Waiting room,
I feel so lonely,
Hospital waiting rooms,
I can't say I like them,
Truth is ,I've seen them alot,
I sit here every week,
Same room, Same chair,
It's not really fair,
I do like the silence,
The dullness in you
Tells me that you're sad,
Its not bad to be sad,
But you're bringing me down too.

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CrazyGurl97 replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 12:20 pm

Awe, it's sad but its really good.

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Feb. 12, 2013 at 7:10 pm

Wow, I really like this one a lot! <3

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Little_Miss_Jo_ replied...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 12:00 pm

This reminds me of when my Grandpa was in the hospital dying from melodysplasia syndrome :/ really accurate and good, nicely done

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