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From The Bottom Of My Heart

Goku-Is-Ness posted this thread...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 2:28 pm

My eyes sadden as I look at you,
No need to glare,
Just want yo to know
I still care,
What I did was stupid,
I’m really sorry for that
Can you just hear me out
Just for a few minutes,
You may hate me,
But I want you to know, no matter what,
I still think of you as a brother,
I only messed with you
Cause I thought it was funny,
I thought you would laugh too,
I see now,
It wasn’t funny,
I’m so sorry,
This poem and apology
Is from the deepest part of my heart,
I’m so sorry,
I never wanted to lose you,
You’re like a brother to me,
Remember all the trouble we got into,
It’s not something you can undo,
The way we hung out at the part
The memories we share burns
So hot in my mind,
Please hear me out,
I’m very sorry
From the bottom of my heart
Just remember
I’m still here

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 10:03 am

What do you guys think of it?

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JunieSparrowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 11:59 pm

It's good.  It's a very sincere yet juvenile apology.  Perfect tone!  I wish I could see the speaker saying it.  :)

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