Teen Ink
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TeenInk How would you rearrange this old cliche? "You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" http://t.co/xTNZxcKYxK
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TeenInk "Thinking is the best way to travel." - The Moody Blues http://t.co/5jzE5kVJyB
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TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi
So, I started writing, and I had no plot or other thoughts in mind as I wrote this paragraph. After writing it, I got numerous ideas. I wanted to know what people's opinions, and thoughts, wehter this peice has potential. Even if anyone wants to join my thought process in writing feel free. I will post it below.
I walk through the door trembling, uncertain of my state. I knew I needed to leave, to evacuate the surroundings I was in. The only problem was: I didn’t know where the hell I was. I had a dark cloth wrapped around my head, blocking my line of vision. My nostrils were filled with a smell of some masculine odor, emitting from the hand that covered my nose and mouth. My only usable sense was my hearing; all my ears detected were the scuffling of mine and my captor’s feet, as well as his heavy, labored breathing on my neck. I felt helpless, for even my hands were bound by some unknown material. The one coherent thought that raced through my mind was of escaping.
Sorry, I am trying to post the paragraph, t it's being weird. It'll be posted.
It sounds epic! my kind of writing! shud i take a shot at this? o.o
