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Art94 posted this thread...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 2:08 pm

So, I started writing, and I had no plot or other thoughts in mind as I wrote this paragraph. After writing it, I got numerous ideas. I wanted to know what people's opinions, and thoughts, wehter this peice has potential. Even if anyone wants to join my thought process in writing feel free. I will post it below. 

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Art94 replied...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 2:08 pm





I walk through the door trembling, uncertain of my state. I knew I needed to leave, to evacuate the surroundings I was in. The only problem was: I didn’t know where the hell I was. I had a dark cloth wrapped around my head, blocking my line of vision. My nostrils were filled with a smell of some masculine odor, emitting from the hand that covered my nose and mouth. My only usable sense was my hearing; all my ears detected were the scuffling of mine and my captor’s feet, as well as his heavy, labored breathing on my neck. I felt helpless, for even my hands were bound by some unknown material. The one coherent thought that raced through my mind was of escaping.




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Art94 replied...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 2:13 pm

Sorry, I am trying to post the paragraph, t it's being weird. It'll be posted. 

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EbonyandIvory replied...
Mar. 15, 2013 at 12:03 pm

It sounds epic! my kind of writing! shud i take a shot at this? o.o

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