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I'll be Waiting. Please write a rap to go with this! Please!

2014Nation posted this thread...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 12:07 pm

You had my heart

then tore it apart

And left it lying there

 

As I picked up the pieces

You stood and watched

As if you didn't care

 

But i know

That soon

The guilt will consume you

 

And for several nights 

You'll be lying awake

And all those hours 

It will take to fall asleep 

I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams

I wont let you go so easily

You wont forget what you did to me

My pay back will be misery

I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams

 

Soon you'll regret with all you have

And lay your life on the line

As you beg on your knees 

I'll stand and watch

Then leave you sitting there

 

Cause I knew

That soon 

The guilt would consume you

 

And for several nights

You were lying awake

And for all those hours

It took to fall asleep

I was waiting waiting in you dreams 

I wouldn't let you go so easily

You won't forget what you did to me

I know my pay back was misery

Cause I was waiting waiting in your dreams

 

(Rap)

 

Cause for several nights 

You were lying awake

And for all those hours

It took to fall asleep

I was waiting to make you see

I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams

And I will stay reminding you of me

 

 

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DynamoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 1:37 pm

So you are actually haunting the other person! Just a pun:)

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2014Nation replied...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 1:46 pm

Haha oh yea! But she's just saying that no way in this world will she let him forget her. 

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DynamoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 2:57 pm

I cant think of anything right now, but i sure will try to contribute something after some time:)

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2014Nation replied...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 3:25 pm

Thank you! I know that a rap will really make this song great!

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LiteraryMastermind replied...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 10:28 pm

Every night I can't sleep; It's a nightmare to behold

Feel the fire of anger claw deep at my soul

And I'm break a cold sweat, stumbled off my bed

A buzzing sensation - firecrackers in my head

 

I walk to the bathroom, I turn on the light

The shock of brightness pierces through the night

I look in the mirror, as if in a dream

And the horror what you've done to me just makes me 'bout to scream"

 

This is the best I got. Like it?

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DynamoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 29, 2012 at 10:48 am

As you open the door of fate

 

The shivering darkness will entomb you

 

And you will see a physiognomie

 

A misery to add to your name

 

In the deepest dreams you dream

 

You will find me waiting for thee

 

And i will sing of your treachery

 

You will never be able to forget me

 

thats what i can do at the moment. Hope you like it:)

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2014Nation replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 12:07 am

 i'm guessing you're raping the guys point of view. i like it.

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2014Nation replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 12:08 am

i really like ypur too dynamo! my freind is going to help me choose.  

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DynamoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 1:46 am

I didnt do it that well. Besides i didnt know if it appeared written by a guy.^_^ 

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realbeautifulheart replied...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 4:57 pm

When sleep takes you, I will chase you
Into the dark recesses of your mind
There you will once again find me
Waves of guilt will consume you like a fire
You sick, twisted liar
How did you ever think you could escape me?
Now you will finally see the pain
From the other side of the chain
It's time to pay you back in misery
For justice and for liberty
Sweet dreams

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2014Nation replied...
Aug. 18, 2012 at 5:26 pm

I truly love this. every one else's were wonderful, but your's...... I couldn't stop smiing once i read it. Thats how i know this one is perfect! Thank  you!

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realbeautifulheart replied...
Aug. 23, 2012 at 11:58 pm

Thanks, I'm glad you like it :) At least something I wrote is being used haha.

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WriterHeadThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 8, 2013 at 9:39 am

Rap:
I was good to you, did everything for you
I gave you everything I had, I thought this love would last
I put you first, but you put me last
You got me staring out the window, thinking about the past
You manipulated and deceived me, oh no, you won't forget me
 
SIDE NOTE: I'm jelous, I wish I wrote this. Good job!!!! :)

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