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Jun. 23, 2012 at 12:07 pm
You had my heart
then tore it apart
And left it lying there
As I picked up the pieces
You stood and watched
As if you didn't care
But i know
That soon
The guilt will consume you
And for several nights
You'll be lying awake
And all those hours
It will take to fall asleep
I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams
I wont let you go so easily
You wont forget what you did to me
My pay back will be misery
I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams
Soon you'll regret with all you have
And lay your life on the line
As you beg on your knees
I'll stand and watch
Then leave you sitting there
Cause I knew
That soon
The guilt would consume you
And for several nights
You were lying awake
And for all those hours
It took to fall asleep
I was waiting waiting in you dreams
I wouldn't let you go so easily
You won't forget what you did to me
I know my pay back was misery
Cause I was waiting waiting in your dreams
(Rap)
Cause for several nights
You were lying awake
And for all those hours
It took to fall asleep
I was waiting to make you see
I'll be waiting waiting in your dreams
And I will stay reminding you of me
Jun. 23, 2012 at 1:37 pm
So you are actually haunting the other person! Just a pun:)
Jun. 23, 2012 at 1:46 pm
Haha oh yea! But she's just saying that no way in this world will she let him forget her.
Jun. 23, 2012 at 2:57 pm
I cant think of anything right now, but i sure will try to contribute something after some time:)
Jun. 23, 2012 at 3:25 pm
Thank you! I know that a rap will really make this song great!
Jun. 24, 2012 at 10:28 pm
Every night I can't sleep; It's a nightmare to behold
Feel the fire of anger claw deep at my soul
And I'm break a cold sweat, stumbled off my bed
A buzzing sensation - firecrackers in my head
I walk to the bathroom, I turn on the light
The shock of brightness pierces through the night
I look in the mirror, as if in a dream
And the horror what you've done to me just makes me 'bout to scream"
This is the best I got. Like it?
Jun. 29, 2012 at 10:48 am
As you open the door of fate
The shivering darkness will entomb you
And you will see a physiognomie
A misery to add to your name
In the deepest dreams you dream
You will find me waiting for thee
And i will sing of your treachery
You will never be able to forget me
thats what i can do at the moment. Hope you like it:)
Jul. 14, 2012 at 12:07 am
i'm guessing you're raping the guys point of view. i like it.
Jul. 14, 2012 at 12:08 am
i really like ypur too dynamo! my freind is going to help me choose.
Jul. 14, 2012 at 1:46 am
I didnt do it that well. Besides i didnt know if it appeared written by a guy.^_^
Aug. 15, 2012 at 4:57 pm
When sleep takes you, I will chase you
Into the dark recesses of your mind
There you will once again find me
Waves of guilt will consume you like a fire
You sick, twisted liar
How did you ever think you could escape me?
Now you will finally see the pain
From the other side of the chain
It's time to pay you back in misery
For justice and for liberty
Sweet dreams
Aug. 18, 2012 at 5:26 pm
I truly love this. every one else's were wonderful, but your's...... I couldn't stop smiing once i read it. Thats how i know this one is perfect! Thank you!
Aug. 23, 2012 at 11:58 pm
Thanks, I'm glad you like it :) At least something I wrote is being used haha.
Jun. 8, 2013 at 9:39 am
Rap:
I was good to you, did everything for you
I gave you everything I had, I thought this love would last
I put you first, but you put me last
You got me staring out the window, thinking about the past
You manipulated and deceived me, oh no, you won't forget me
SIDE NOTE: I'm jelous, I wish I wrote this. Good job!!!! :)
