Teen Ink

Mar. 2, 2012 at 4:51 pm

I could help :)

Mar. 5, 2012 at 8:34 am

Awesome! Any ideas?  

Mar. 5, 2012 at 10:41 am

*deep anouncer voice*

"In a world where cookies are unknown to it's inhabitants, one alien romance may turn their entire existance upside down."

lol i know thats really bad

Mar. 5, 2012 at 1:28 pm

haha I like it :)  

Mar. 5, 2012 at 6:23 pm

how should we do it have two main characters we go back and forth between or have one main character we switch off?  

Mar. 6, 2012 at 8:36 am

oh!oh! Two main characters that are like, best frienemies!!!!:)  

Mar. 7, 2012 at 3:39 pm

Lujena Mortuy

Female

16 years

Personality: Fun and bubbly with an extreme dark side. Never afraid to kick some butt. Protective to those she cares about. you dont wanna be on her bad side.

Looks: Medium length dark red hair, killer green eyes, average body build, wears a lot of dark colors

Bio: born on the distant planet of Groken. Her planet was engaged in a violent war and most died, but her and her little brother were amoung the few survivors. She now takes care of her 8 year old brother named Tark and is way to eager (and a tiny bit scared) to fall in love.

Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:46 am

((Sweeet!!!I like it!!!))

Lyrico Thomas

Male

17 years

Personality: Fun, excited, a bit over reactive. Has a short temper and is a pure breed hothead. Loves to laugh, make jokes, and annoy the crap out his friends. Can be very sweet and tender hearted and is surprisingly sensitive. Not afraid to love, but scared he won't be loved back.

Looks: Emo cut with white-blond hair, a few black strands. Tall with bright green eyes. Likes wearing simple colors; white,black, blue and green.

Bio:Lives alone, doesn't really know or care where his father is. Has a younger sister in foster care. Born on earth but totally out of this world.

Mar. 8, 2012 at 3:01 pm

i like it! so where should the story start?  

Mar. 8, 2012 at 3:08 pm

hmm...we're on our home planet (you can come up with a name) and we are trying to kill each other in our version of 'laser tag' :)  

Mar. 8, 2012 at 4:26 pm

What had started out as a normal day on the planet of Niribu had quickly spiraled into an epic game of laser tag. While dodging his blasts I ducked behind a tree and shot back 5 times. I darted off again, sure he would never be able to catch me.

Mar. 8, 2012 at 8:08 pm

Faster than me and pro ally stronger,I am almost afraid to get any closer. ....almost Dodging five more dangerous shots, I try to shoot back,"crap!" I scveam as a laser scums my. Cheek.wayyyy too close.

Mar. 9, 2012 at 8:48 am

"Whoa!" I barely duck fast enough as five shots wizz past my ear. I fall in the underbrush, face down. Growling, I get up and shoot two shots at the fast moving whatever.

I may not be as fast, but I have pretty great accuracy.

 

Mar. 9, 2012 at 10:49 am

"CRAP!" He was good. I looked down and assessed how bad he had damaged my black leather jacket. I shot a couple more times in his direction and hid.

Mar. 9, 2012 at 8:31 pm

He couldnt beat me. I knew I would end up on top. All I had to do was dodge and get close enough to improve my accuracy.

Mar. 9, 2012 at 8:58 pm

My jacket was singed, she was getting cocky, And as for me; well, I was pissed. Especially since it wass my favorite jacket. Isn't that some kind of universal rule not to singe your friend's favorite jacket? Eiether way, I was through with monolougues.

GAMETIME.

Mar. 11, 2012 at 4:32 am

Just a suggestion but you could be like a little later in '...and that was when I saw it, a ginormous chocolate-chipped, Maryland cookie heading straight for me'

Mar. 11, 2012 at 4:41 am

Wow, really peed off now half of my last comment didn't send! :( This is what I tried to say, its just a suggestion but you could be like a little later in '...and that was when I saw it, a ginormous chocolate-chipped, Maryland cookie heading straight for me', I like the idea of it like peering over the top a massive hill or something haha.. Have fun with this & good luck! P.S. Toran, I have some new ideas for our story so when you reply next, I'll fill you and LiteraryMastermind in okay? =]

Mar. 11, 2012 at 7:30 pm

I shot and ducked and dodged, not letting him have the satisfaction of hitting me. I knew my speed would greatly surpass his.