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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 7:24 pm

Ember looked down, away from Ace. She knew she was in for it, after she had lost her composer when they came abord. She grimaced and went into the hallway, then without waiting for his orders, she went in his room. It sundenly seemed very small, much smaller than it had been before. Perhaps it was because of how angry Ace was. That man is his father.

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 7:42 pm

Ace entered the room behind Ember and shut and locked the door behind them.  He sat down on his bed and just sat there with a blank, yet furious expression upon his face.  "Listen, I don't know what you are but those men definitely had it in for you.  I don't know why, but I'm not going to worry about that right now."  he grumbled before continuing.  "As for my father, if I can even call him that, I didn't know he was the captain of that ship.  I didn't even know he was alive for that matter.  I know you're probably angry, because you've obviously had a past with those men."  Ace stated sternly, looking to Ember to try and read her emotions; but to no avail.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 8:36 pm

Ember didn't look at him, or any where near him. She hated him now, maybe it was unfair, maybe it wasn't right of her, but these men were bad, and she hated them with all her being. The fact that this man, son of their leader, had captured her and imprisoned her here made her hate him. Ember didn't look at him, and cleared her face, when she looked up she had a blank face. "What are you getting at?"

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 8:21 pm

Ace huffed irritably.  "I don't know what I'm getting at.  Obviously you're mad.  Even though you're supposed to be my "prisoner" and what not, you're more than that to me.  There is definitely something special about you, but I don't know what.  Maybe I'll find out one day, maybe it will be too late, and you'll be back happily married off to the prime minister."  he grumbled, not knowing where he himself was going with this not well thought out speech.  "I don't want you to hate me for who my father is, because as of right now he is my greatest enemy."  Ace growled, a slight rumble sounding deep in his throat.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 19, 2013 at 9:12 pm

Ember made sure she was in the spot furthest away from him. "Yea thats wonderful." She said sarcasticaly. "Your the son of one of them, no, worse, you are the son of the captain. Those defungled devices, they always go off around me! I bet they go off around all women." She said bitterly. Then Ember looked up at Ace, "How am I soposed to trust you? You kidnapped me taking me away from the Prime Minister who would have been an awful husband, but thats beside the point, and you are the son of a captain of a crew thats tryed to kill me before and didn't succeed - and - and..." Ember trailed off, her eyes filling with tears. Then she whispered, "And you say that you hate them but thats beside the point."

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 19, 2013 at 9:43 pm

"What do you mean it's besides the point?"  Ace spat angrily.  "Ember, what don't you understand about this?  I didn't know he was my father until just a few moments ago.  I found out that that filthy man was my dad the same time you did!  Imagine that!  Yes I captured youm but you say the prime minister would have made an awful husband.  Basically, I did you a favor."  Ace growled.  He was furious, not at Ember but at what his dad had done.  "I don't want you to be mad, but I'm sure it's too later for that now."  he muttered with an exasperated sigh.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2013 at 10:56 am

((Just curious, did Ace acutaly spit, or are you saying he spat out his words? Just wondering :)  ))
 
Ember turned to him angerily, "I don't care I don't care! He's your father!" Then she said a bunch of words in another laungue, something like French. She continued, her tears falling, "He's the captan of the FeatherStorm! That means you are the successor! You own that ship when he dies! I hope the crew goes into mutainy!" Ember let out a sob and sat on the floor, her knees curled up to her chest.

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 2:54 pm

(( Haha he just spat out his words! :) ))

Ace just watched now. His face was fading red from his prior anger. "I don't know what I have to say to make you believe me. Clearly you are too one sided to even consider my explanation. Did it ever occur to you that maybe I want nothing to do with my father? Maybe, I don't want to affiliate with him in any way?" he spoke quietly, yet sternly. "But I guess you'll never realize that." Ace muttered and began walking toward the door. As he was about to close it behind him, he turned around and uttered one last sentence. "To think I protected you from them. Maybe you would've liked it better on their ship." he grumbled, and shut the door. He was so fully angered and saddened, that he had forgotten to lock the door.

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 3:46 pm

Ace was thoroughly upset now.  He was no longer angry, mostly saddened.  "Listen Ember, I don't know who you really are, but there's something about you I can't quite grasp my mind around.  However, taking this all into consideration, I can't believe the words coming from my mouth, nor do I understand them all."  he muttered, referring to he speaking in a different language.  "Now, did you ever think that maybe I don't want any affiliation with my father what so ever?  Or, maybe I'm ashamed of him?  I think the worst thing you can do is judge or push away someone because of who their father is."  he whispered softly, but sternly.  He began walking towards the door.  Before he left, he said one last thing.  "I thought you'd be different.  To think I protected you from them.  Maybe.... Maybe I shouldn't have."  he whispered, and shut the door. 

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 3:48 pm

(( Sorry that was the 2nd time I tried posting.  TI is being annoying!!!  But Ace didn't spit, haha he spat his words :) ))

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 6:04 pm

Ember sobbed softly into her knees but she heard Ace. She flinched as spoke when he closed the door. When she was sure he was gone ((he could be gone at this point, but he doesn't have to be)) Ember spoke to the empty room, “You shouldn't have, I'm an unknown enemy to the people you love, I'm prey to your birthright, and I'm your kind's natural enemy. And I'm allowed to judge you, your a – you are a – your one of them.” Ember's eyes filled with tears again, but she pushed them down. After all now she was alone in the room, she had to take advantage of it. Ember pulled herself up off the floor and the pebble under the neck of her dress began to vibrate.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 6:05 pm

Ember sobbed softly into her knees but she heard Ace. She flinched as spoke when he closed the door. When she was sure he was gone ((he could be gone at this point, but he doesn't have to be)) Ember spoke to the empty room, “You shouldn't have, I'm an unknown enemy to the people you love, I'm prey to your birthright, and I'm your kind's natural enemy. And I'm allowed to judge you, your a – you are a – your one of them.” Ember's eyes filled with tears again, but she pushed them down. After all now she was alone in the room, she had to take advantage of it. Ember pulled herself up off the floor and the pebble under the neck of her dress began to vibrate.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 6:05 pm

Ember sobbed softly into her knees but she heard Ace. She flinched as spoke when he closed the door. When she was sure he was gone ((he could be gone at this point, but he doesn't have to be)) Ember spoke to the empty room, “You shouldn't have, I'm an unknown enemy to the people you love, I'm prey to your birthright, and I'm your kind's natural enemy. And I'm allowed to judge you, your a – you are a – your one of them.” Ember's eyes filled with tears again, but she pushed them down. After all now she was alone in the room, she had to take advantage of it. Ember pulled herself up off the floor and the pebble under the neck of her dress began to vibrate.

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Nov. 27, 2013 at 6:24 pm

Ahhhh Testing testing 1 two four test failed

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 6:28 pm

((Sorry that was Teddy))

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 7:50 pm

(( Haha Teddy has a TI now?  Cool!! :) ))
 
When he was no less than halfway down the corridor, he heard Ember speak once more.  He gently pressed his hear to the door and listened to her words.  Due to the heavy wooden door, the sound of her voice was muffled and he could only make out a handful of words.  All he heard was 'You're one of them.' 
Those words echoed over and over again in his hand.  They stabbed him in the heart, and hurt him more than words could explain.  Ace decided he would alert the captain that they could sail back to Ember's down and return her for the desired ransom.  He wanted no piece of her any longer.

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 28, 2013 at 9:23 am

Ember pulled the pebble out and held it in her hand. Imetiatly a blank image flashed up and Ember started to record. She said everything that had happened and when she was done, she closed her hand over the pebble, cutting the image off. Then she sat back down in the corner, curled up waiting for Ace to come back.
 
((Ooh! What if another crew member comes and takes her? Like he trys to take advantage of her but Ace comes in and helps her?))

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 28, 2013 at 7:17 pm

((Let me rephrase that: I don't want to do mature romance, but the crew member could be just kissing her and it was obviously going that way when Ace found them.))

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GreekGoddessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 29, 2013 at 10:10 am

((I do NOT mean do mature romance, I mean like he could be kissing her, and it would obviously be leading to that but we wouldn't do that))

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Shooting.StarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 29, 2013 at 8:06 pm

(( Haha yeah that makes sense!!  That sounds like a good idea, you wanna play the other crew member or shall I? ))

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