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Aug. 25, 2013 at 8:05 pm

Jess shuddered as Rhian gasp.  She was shaking, and it was obvious that she was experiencing immense pain.  "I'm not leaving your side."  Jess whispered, continuing to softly stroke Rhian's hand with her thumb.  "I'll make sure Eris is safe.  I'll take care of her always."  Jess murmured softly.  She wanted to tell her this all before Rhian was gone for good.  Tears dribbled down her cheeks, it hurt to see such a genuine person die so painfully and so soon.

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Aug. 25, 2013 at 8:27 pm

"Th-than' 'oo." Rhian muttered painfully, she took one more gasp before she went limp, her heart stopped.  Rhian was gone now.
 
Eris heard Daddy storm passed her hiding spot, she held her breath as he passed, afraid even breathing would give her away.

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Aug. 25, 2013 at 9:03 pm

Before she knew it, Rhian took her final breath.  Jess was sobbing now, resting her head on the woman's now lifeless body.  "Rhian, oh Rhian, you were such a good mother."  she choked out in the midst of her sobbing.  Tears continued to stream done her face as she could only hope and pray that Eris would escape safely and not be under her father's capture anymore.

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Aug. 25, 2013 at 9:18 pm

Her father was gone, he'd passed her twice, once on the way out and once on the way back.  Eris slippe dout and continued on the way she'd been going, just walking though.  She had no idea where to go, she'd always been blindfolded when going out and didn't know how to get into town.
 
Daddy stormed into the room, 
"The little brat got away, no worries though she cna't get back she'll die in the woods." he snapped, he looked at Rhian,
"She kicked it didn't she." he siad coldly.

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Aug. 25, 2013 at 11:24 pm

Jess looked up as her father entered the cell.  She stood protectively in front of Rhian's body.  "Yes, she did."  she answered coldly, giving her father an icy glare.  "And it was all thanks to you, you filthy coward!"  she shouted at him, running up to him and giving him a hard punch in the face.  She knew she would pay for it, and it hadn't done much damage.  Backing away slowly, she resumed her position protectively in front of Rhian's body.

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Aug. 25, 2013 at 11:52 pm

Daddy grabbed Jess's wrists and rose her hands above her head,
"Don't you know you never hit me, you little..." he spat in her face, his hands deftly stripped Jess and he tied her to the bed so she was spread eagled, 
"You'r egoing to pay for that." he hissed, he left ehr tie dto the bed as he grabbed Rhian's body,
"But meanwhile I have to put her with the others." he siad and left the room, locking the door behind him.

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Aug. 26, 2013 at 12:46 pm

Jess flailed weakly as Daddy stripped her and tied her to the bed.  The ropes scratched against her skin.  She desperately wanted to itch, but the more she moved the more they burned across her skin. Watching as her father roughly picked up Rhian, like she was nothing but a sack of flour, she turned her head away.  She couldn't bear to watch. But what did her father mean by 'putting her with the others'?  There were more?  More dead people that he had so viciously abused and killed?  She shuddered at the thought of it, and waited for her father to return into the room, terrified for what he was going to do next.

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Aug. 26, 2013 at 12:58 pm

Daddy returned about an hour later, his knees and hands had bloods, dirt and soot on them, he looked at Jess, 

"You've gotten prettier." he said, sitting at the edge of the bed, running his fingers along her curves,
"Not as many scars as I like though." he siad, he pulled an exacto-blade out of his pocket.  Snapping it open he pressed the blade against Jess's stomach and starting to draw a long line on it.

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Aug. 26, 2013 at 1:04 pm

Daddy was carving a word into Jess's stomach, the letters were large and raggedy, he purposefully didn't make straight easy lines.  
He was carving his own name into her stomach.  The message said "Kraten Winter's little girl". He cut deep but not deep enough to cut anything major.

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Aug. 28, 2013 at 7:18 pm

Chills ran down along Jess's spine as her father touched the curves along her body ever so gently.  As the pressed the blade to her stomach, she cringed, and turned her head away.  She grimaced in pain, screaming out as the blade skillfully carved words and jagged lines across her body.  Blood began to ooze from them, but no majory organs or arteries had been damaged.  She now managed to look down at her stomach, she knew words had been spelled, but she couldn't tell what they said from upside down.  "Why are you doing this?"  Jess choked out.  From the pain she was in, it was hard to speak.

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Aug. 28, 2013 at 8:57 pm

"See I want you to know your place, Jessica, you're mine, you can't change that no matter what pretty uniform you put on." Daddy siad as he finished the words. He put the blood run down MJ's stomach and drip down between her legs and onto her thighs.
"Look at it, Jesica, isn't it pretty." he said.  He started to fondle her, running his hands over her curves and whole body, stroking and squeezing her.
He continued to do this with his left hand and picked the knife up with his right, cleaning the blades on his shorts, his eyes still on the bloody words.

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Aug. 28, 2013 at 10:07 pm

"I don't want to be known as your daughter."  Jess muttered through the pain.  Blood was running down across her body, forming a small pool along each side of her rthighs.  She got goosebumps as her father began to touch her and squeeze her.  It brought back horrid memories of her childhood.  "Stop!"  Jess cried out in despair, knowing it would do no good, perhaps even making it worse.  She watched for a moment has he wiped his blade clean, she could only guess what he would do next with it.  Her breathing grew hard and rapid, almost as if she was hyperventilating.

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Aug. 28, 2013 at 11:08 pm

Daddy shook his head, he started to stroke her gently, starting with her face and moving down her body.  He made his touch light and soft and yet forceful enough to make her feel he was in total control.
He took the blade move up to her collar bone and satrte dto cut just above her breast.  It was a heart, this time he used smooth lines but did it slowly.  His free hand kept stroking an dcarressing her bare body, he felt the gosebumps rising on her skin.
 
Eris had been going in circles, she knew that when she found herself back at the house.  She was confused and looked around, Eris had never been taught how to navigate or find her way through woods, she had spent her whole life either in the house or with her father on his 'missions'.  When she was traveling she'd been blindfolded and tied up so she didn't know where they were going.  
Eris turned and walked down the over grown pah hoping it would lead somewhere she knew.

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Aug. 29, 2013 at 12:05 pm

Jess shivered at her father's touch.  His touch was soft, but firm.  There was no doubt who was in control at this point.  He had now moved the blade just above her breast, using the blade to carve smooth lines into some sort of shape.  She hated the fact that he was touching her, using her actually.  "Why... are you doing this?"  Jess hissed at her father, yelping in pain when he carved the heart into her skin.  She watched the blood begin to swell, and dribble onto her breast.

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Aug. 29, 2013 at 12:11 pm

"Because I can...you made me lose my newest specimen...Eris.  Now she's wandering around in the woods, she'll probably never find her way out of the woods." he said.  he finished the heart and cut the word 'Daddy' into it.  He watched the blood run down her body and he smeared his fingers in it, pinching her roughly and suddenly,
"You can't escape, Jessica." he said, he pushed at the edges of the cut and he leaned down and licked the blood up,
"Maybe I'll go find your precious Eris and bring her back." he whispered in her ear, pressing the knife blade against her neck.

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Aug. 29, 2013 at 8:24 pm

Jess shrieked as her father cut another word into her body.  Her entire body jolted as he pinched her roughly.  "I'd rather die than be here with you!"  she shouted angrily, tears streaming down her cheeks.  As the blood dribbled down her body, she shivered with disgust as her father licked it off of her.  "Don't hurt Eris.  She's never done anything to you."  Jess choked out, the blade of the knife now ever so cold against her neck.  All she wanted to do was find Eris, and somehow make it out of here alive.

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Aug. 29, 2013 at 8:52 pm

Daddy sneered at Jessica, 

"She ran away." he  said, he unzipped his trousers and stradled her.  He kept the knife pressed to her neck as he r*ped her.  He was rough becuase he was angry she wasn't totaly compliant.  He fixed his trousers and pated Jessica between the legs,
"Bye bye Jessie, I'm going to find your sweet little baby sister." he said adn he walked out, locking the door behind him.
 
Eris walked along the side of the dirt road, her head down her eyes focused on the ground and on her shoes and she walked.  She only let her thoughts go as far as the next step and not of what was happening to mommy and MJ.

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Sept. 2, 2013 at 8:17 pm

As her father r**ed her, she let out shrieks and cries of pain.  The knife blade was pressed ever so roughly into her neck as her father continued.  He was so rough, it was all she could do not to cry.  Once he got off her, the tears began streaming down her cheeks.  She watched disdainfully as he exited the cell and locked the door.  He left her strapped to the table, still exposed.  Jess began to have anxiety, her breath coming in rapid gasps as she cried.  She felt her heart pulsing rapidly from her chest.
 
Now not only did she fear for her own life and safety, but she prayed that he wouldn't find Eris.  She knew her fate wouldn't be good, her father would be even more upset now that Eris had run away twice.

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Sept. 2, 2013 at 9:06 pm

Eris stumbled onto the main road suddenly, it'd been a long walk but she'd found it.  She turned and wandered down the way that looked like it was towards town.  It was then she heard the motorcar behind her, she looked back it was Daddy's large rumbling beat up forest green pick up truck.  She started to run, the road wasn't totally deserted maybe that would deter him from acting.  eris stumbled, her bare feet slamming into the hard concrete, she heard the truck go fast behind her.
 
((You can PowerPlay the father if you want.))

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Sept. 3, 2013 at 10:05 pm

((OK, so I had this idea.  See like I believe I said the cult is deeper than anybody thinks so the father is eventually caught but some of the people on the jury are part of the hidden cult and maybe even some higher up people like a judge of city cousul men.  The case id 'dismissed'
Jessica still searches for a way to capture her father though while continuing to ty and avoid recapture and keep Eris safe(Or maybe Eris was returned to her father's custody so she wants to protect her and get her back as well.  
The person who's highest up in the police ranks pulls her off the force or case and threans her with jail but she keep going.
Oh yeah and I don't know if this'll have a happy or bad ending yet...))

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