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bookworm1999 replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 1:19 pm

Harlow stopped and looked her up and down, eyes flittering over her body. he reached in and pulled a loose strand behind her ear. He nodded. "Keep it up, soldier."

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 1:50 pm

Remi nodded, not daring to show how relived and glad she was that she'd passed.  Harlow thought she was doing a good job!  And she hadn't been yelled at by Rebel.  The rest of teh inspection went OK, Rebel yelled alot at recruits who didn't mak their beds right adn in one case he flipped a mattress off a bed becuase teh ebd was amde so poorly,
"ALRIGHT EVERYONE OUTSIDE FOR PT!" Rebel yelled after inspection was done, "MOVE MOVE IT!!" He added.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 3:56 pm

Harlow escaped the room, leading the men outside outsidE.

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 4:02 pm

"Let's go!" Rebel screamed as teh recruits ran past him outside, he followed them, 

"FALL IN!" he yelled, He kept yellinga dn crusing unil everyone was lined up and satnding at attention, he ran to the front of the suadron after runing around it to make sure everyone wa sin line, 

Rebel led them in stretches, though nobody seeme dto do it right and he was constatly screaming at people, 

"WE'LL BE DOING OUR RUN NOW< GOT THAT!?!?!" he yelled, the squad resonded, but rather quietly,
"SINCE Y'ALL CAN"T YELL WE'RE GOING TO DO THE MUD!!!!" Rebel said, "Is that understood!?" he added,
 
"YES SOLDIER REBEL!" the squad yelled Remi yelling as loudly as possible,
 Rebel started off, they were going to do a three mile mud run, which was a run through mud, which was up to people's knee.  Remi was struggling Rebel was screaming at the them adn running along the bank telling tme to move it.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:10 am

Meanwhile, Harlow supervised, eyeing each soldier, catching up with other teachers.

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:19 am

Remi stumbled, struggling in the mud.  Rebel came up next to her,
"Move it, move it!" he yelled at her, she tried to move faster, but neverhaving been strong itw as hard, plus she was small and teh mud went higher up on her legs than most people.  Remi stubled and fell into the mud, Rebel stood over her, 
"Get up, get up ,move it!" he yelled at her, Remi started to force herself to her feet.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:30 am

Harlow blew his whistle. "Alright soldiers, get cleaned up and be down at the HQ in an hour."

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 11:51 am

Remi stumbled into teh barracks, gad taht PT had been cut short, but wondering what else was going on that was this important.  He gave them an hour to get ready!  Normally they got 15-30 mnutes.  At least when Rebel was running things.  Rebel entered the barracks,
"Wear your Dress Grays!  We are going to HQ, I don't want to see anyoen in BDUS!" he commanded them, his voice still lud and overbearing.  HE left teh room to get dressed and clean up himself.  Remi grabbed her dress uniform and went into the bathroom to shower.  Something really important must be happening, the only wore Dress uniforms too HQ and a few otehr places normally they wore BDUs and did training all day.  Remi got into the shower adn satrted to clean the mud off of her body.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 11:54 am

((Going to make this character))
A voice cooed through Remi's shower. "Eh.... beauty....." A figure stepped from the scene, a young teenage boy wiht a crude, lustful, lackluster smile. "Let me see ya..."

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:26 pm

Remi swallowed adn grabbed a towel, she wasn't perfectly clean, but she didn't care, she wrapped it around her body.  She didn't care who this boy was, she wasn't about to do anything for him.  She shivered, the shower was still on and since all the other girls were showering the room was steamy.
"Go away." she muttered.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:34 pm

Drax  appeared from the steam. "Hey Remi..." He said casually, looking her up and down. "Finally caught you where I want you." He healed the key to the door and dropped it down the shower drain. "Oops." He stated, smirking. He walked up to her, forcefully pushign her against the shower wall and covering her mouth. He grinded his body agains her's, immobilizing her completely. 

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:38 pm

Remi grunted adn struggled as best as she could, but he was bigger and stronger than she was.  Drax had been after her since she came her.  She tried to move a hand up to clutch at her towel and keep it on, but wans't able to move at all,
Go away, Drax, I don't want this." she insisted, she couldn't leave, her shower stall was locked adn the key gone.  She took a deep breath preparing to scream.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:42 pm

He insistantly grabbed her with a kiss, his tongue dancing and darting through her mouth. He struggled to pull off the towel, punching her up the gut and tearing it off. "I know you don't but I do..."

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:46 pm

Remi felt like retching when he pushed his tongue into her mouth.  Her towel was gone, She wanted to scream, to tell him to leave, she coudl hear the other girls leaving, teh shower room, they had no idea what was going on in here.  She was struggling to breath after being hit in the gut, she honestly felt like she'd rather take teh rath of Rebel over this.  She was naked now, and vulnerable tehre was no way for her to protect herself, tears started to form in her eyes.

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:49 pm

He punched her hard in the gut, moving all possible air  in her lungs as they sank to the floor. He punched her again, in case she decided to scream. He took the short moment to explore her body, cluthching and fiddling with her breasts, reaching adown and licking them. 

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:53 pm

Remi writhed, but couldn't get away, she couldn't even breath.  She didn't like his mouth on her, his hand fondling her.  She wanted to wake up and discover this was all a very bad dream.  That nothing like this was happening, taht was about to awkaened by yelling and trash can lids.  She even wanted Rebel to burst in here and yell at her for not getting ready fast enough, but Rebel never went into the women's bathroom, he had at leats some class.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:56 pm

He pulled his body up to her, his manhood hovering over her mouth. He pried her mouth open and thrusted it inside of her, sitting on her diapram and not giving her a lot of air to squirm or yell. 

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:59 pm

Tears flowed freely and quickly down Remi's face she wanted to bite him, but wans't brave enough.  This was her fault after all, she wans't strong enough to fight him, she hadn't had the guts to hit him before this began.  It was herfault she was in this situation for forgetting to lock her shwoer stall door, it was her fault now she had to suffer the consquences.

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bookworm1999 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 1:00 pm

He thrust it inside of her. "Swallow!"

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 1:04 pm

Remi did as she was told and swallowed, nearly choking and still struggling for air, the shower water was cooling down, the hot water had been shut off becuase everyone was supposed to be down.  Teh tears came faster, with her eyes she begged Drax to stop, but deep down she knew he wouldn't he wouldn't stop until he got what he wanted, and took what she desperately wanted to keep.

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