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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 5:43 pm

Sarah proceded to help Rai. Something about him made her want to protect him. She went at the rest of the guys. She wince aloud as her wound in the shoulder burned. she still fought the guys off. she killed most, but the rest remained on the ground injured. She fell to her knees and clutched her shoulder.

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 5:55 pm

They were fighting like gods. Fighting flawlessly and every move dealt a fierce blow but was expertly blocked. Then Rai manipulated the leader into his death. The leader tripped over a dead body and Rai pounced onto him. "Where is my sister?" He hissed.
 
"I killed her." The leader laughed. "I-"
Rai killed him. 

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:17 pm

Sarah got up. She was light headed and stumbled her way to Rai. "Rai....... maybe.....maybe shes hidden in this building." she told him. she swayed a bit but then got her balance. she walked to a different room, which had people in there. "rai! maybe one of these people are you sister."

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:21 pm

"No," Rai said, "she's dead." After all of his years, Rai learned how to detect lies and the truth. The leader was speaking the truth all right. Absolute truth. Rai sat down. He rested his head against the wall. He was ready to die.

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:25 pm

Sarah walked/ stumbled to Rai. She sat next to him and lay her good hand on his shoulder. "i'm so sorry. I wish we could have saved her." she told him sincerly. She grounded her teeth as the pain came back but she tried not to show it. "dont worry. im here for you."

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:28 pm

Rai didn't answer, tears came out. For the first time, he didn't know what to do. He tried desperately to cover his tears. All his life, he had done nothing but bad, protecting his sister was the best thing he had done. Now that she was gone... He couldn't bear to think past her death.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:31 pm

Sarah hugged him. She knew how he felt. She had seen her family murdered in her house and he was there for her. now she wanted to be there for him. she rubbed his back a bit to try to calm him.

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Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:35 pm

Rai stood up. After a moment he whispered something. It was dark. He didn't care about the world anymore. About his tittle. It was useless now. Rai walked away.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 6:41 pm

Sarah watched him as he walked away unknowingly she yelled to him. "please dont go. i have nowhere to go. and i have no money. "she said. she had tears coming down now. tears from pain and sadness. She clutched her shoulder and her face a bit pale from blood loss.

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IzuoKanadaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 28, 2013 at 7:04 pm

Rai stared at Sarah, "It wouldn't be safe for you to be with me. As of now, I don't need any nor want anyone being a hindrance." Rai turned and walked away.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 10:12 am

Sarah got up and left. she went to the doctor from before. He patched her up and asked about Rai. she told himm the whole story. "oh my.... Thats not good. here give him this." the doctor told her. Sarah took it and left. she went back and tried to find him.

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Mar. 1, 2013 at 5:57 pm

It was dark. The cave was lit poorly by one dim lamp. Rai was practicing his skills. It had been a week since his sister's death and he had killed a bear, a dozen guys, and a panther. Blood dripped out of his injuries.

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Mar. 4, 2013 at 9:58 am

Sarah hadn't been able to find Rai in a week. she searched high and low for him. she eventually decided to just take a break and walk through the woods. During the time she had left her weapons behind. Then there was a growl.  A panther stood before her baring his teeth. Sarah jumped back and took off running. she screamed for help.

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IzuoKanadaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 4:47 pm

Rai turned around casually, he heard a panther followed by a girl's scream. Rai turned back. He didn't care anymore.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 5:34 pm

Sarah kept running. she ran right trees. "rai!! Somebody! HELP!!!" she screamed. she didnt want to die yet. not like this.

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Mar. 5, 2013 at 8:28 pm

Then Rai heard his name, he hesitated. "Da.mn it." Rai ran off towards the direction of the scream.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 10:09 am

Sarah kept running. She turned again and again throught the trees. She didnt watch where she was going and tripped. she hit the ground. "owww....." she mumbled. She saw the panther coming still. She got back up and turned toward the panther. there was no use running. she got ready to die.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 5:33 pm

((bbummpp))

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IzuoKanadaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 5:38 pm

Just in time Rai jumped out of the bushes and onto the panther. He whipped out his blade and stabbed the panther a multitude of times before dealing the final blow. Rai stood up. He looked at Sarah, "don't follow me." He walked away.

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Goku-Is-Ness replied...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 5:45 pm

Sarah, despite Rai's orders follows him. She sneaks around trying not to be noticed. she still had to give him his thing that the doctor told her to.

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