Teen Ink
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TeenInk How would you rearrange this old cliche? "You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" http://t.co/xTNZxcKYxK
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TeenInk "Thinking is the best way to travel." - The Moody Blues http://t.co/5jzE5kVJyB
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TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi
((Just making sure, I'll take a male fairy healer))
(Everything looks pretty okay, character accepted Guardian.
That would be great Ahhoy)
((critique away!))
Species: fairy
Name: Silversmile
Age: 45 but looks 25
Gender: Male
Appearance: Silversmile stands about 5'7 with a thin body and slight muscle on his arms and legs. His skin is a bronze color showing how much he has stood in sunlight. His blonde hair is short with the layers shifting in length. Silversmile's eyes are a bright green that reflect his quite but playfull personality. His wings are large dragon fly wings, that shine purple in the right light. On Silversmith's back is a large scar that stars from his right shoulder and crosses down his back to his lower left side.
Clothing: When Silversmile is out in the wild hiding from humans, all he wears is pants and a silver chain around his wrist. In the middle of society, he wears a wool shirt that allows his wings out, his pants and silver chain. He refuses to wear shoes because they make noise. He always wears a leather satchel that he has all his herbs and such in.
Weapons: on his wrist chain, there is a small spear, with a little magic he is able to make it grow but he never seems to use it.
Position: healer
Bio: Silversmile was born with two things in his heart: adventure and kindness. Once he was able to leave his home and live on his own he did. He found another fairy that taught him healing magic but mostly how to heal with the plants around. Though he doesn't dare enter human areas, he did once and learned from it. However, Silversmith wasn't able to out run the Knight's guard and now has hesitantly agreed to go on Bronze's journey.
Species:Elf
Name: Galadriel Undómiel
Age:24
Gender: female
Appearance: Waist long black hair ,. 6ft 4in.has a thin scars on her from her battles. also wears a rose in her hair. Her lips are as red as a red rose and her eyes are as blue as the ocean. her skin is kinda pale. and has a thin scar over her right eye. she is able to see out of that eyes still.
Clothing: wears white gown and shoes. sometimes wears hunter outfit. She is a brave warrior. The hunter outfit consists of tight pants a robin hood looking shirt and a golden braided crown. her shoes are jet black and they help her run faster.
Weapons: Sword and Bowa and a quarrel of arrows.
Position: Fighter
Bio: Came from small elven place that she was born and raised in. She was born a hunter and longed to protect her land. She journeys off for a life of adventure.
Bio: Came from small elven place that she was born and raised in. She was born a hunter and longed to protect her land. She journeys off for a life of adventure.One day she got in a fight with a group of guys who wanted to kill her. only one guy gave her a scar that everyone can see. right over her right eye.
(Ahhoy, you didn't include Species in the beginning of the skelleton which is a requirement. Also, my little buzzer is going off with the need to correct all the errors such as blond, note blone, layers, not liars quiet, not quite, starts not stars, and you're in need of more comas in the clothing. Spelling and grammar errors ignored, your character is fine besides missing the species.
Goku, Ignoring the flaws in hopes you play better than you describe characters -I don't mean to be offensive- please just add how your character is a part of this mission. When we start I want EVERYONE to already be a part of the mission and know the meeting place, and I need to know how everyone has become involved that way Bronze would know.)
((EndlessSilenceOFMidnight, i edited it. Sorry this one came out worse then the first >_<.))
(It's okay Ahhoy, just I seem to be especially OCD today...)
(((Endless. Don't you me DCO? hahaha, yes may we start?)))
(As soon as Goku adds how their character has become involved in the mission, I'll go through and do a last check on everything. If everything looks good, I'll make the starting post.)
((I'm sorry. im irratated and sad. i lost a friend.
How do I put how my character is part of the mission?))
(Goku, I don't know what to tell you. It's your character, you have to some up with a logical way. Some way she got recognition and invited on the mission or volunteered and how she proved her usefulness.)
(Goku, I don't know what to tell you. It's your character, you have to some up with a logical way. Some way she got recognition and invited on the mission or volunteered and how she proved her usefulness.)
((Galadriel was invited on a mission and decided to go. She was gonna prove that she wan't useless afterall.))
(Goku, what I need to know is HOW/WHY she was invited on the mission. I mean, this could be anything. Maybe she was in a competition of some sort and Bronze/the king/second-in-command-I-can't-remember-the-name-of-for-the-life-of-me saw her and approached her afterward to join the mission. Maybe that fight you mentioned was very recent and Bronze or the second-in-command saw it and suggested she be in the mission.)
((Okay, Goku I still need that information before you're allowed to post, but I'm gonna go ahead and start here in a moment.))
Bronze
Bronze sat silently at the tavern, sipping on some weak ale as he waited for the people selected for his team to arrive. Mist, the water-air Elemental was already there, sitting next to him with his own drink. Stone, the lone wolf he'd come across, had reported that she might be late, and if she didn't show up before it was time to leave, not to wait up. She seemed confident she could track them and catch up with them. Bronze didn't care, as long as he had someone with enough knowledge about the castle.
