(Okay :) )
(working on it as we speak)
Name: Anton Dimir
Age: Real age is over 500, appears to be about 30.
Appearence: Inky black hair that falls into his golden eyes. He has a strong and muscular build and he has a sassy and sed.uctive smile. His teeth are sharp and pointed, his fangs long and sharp. A soft Romanian-like accent and snow white skin.
Clothing: Black riding pants and a lightweight white shirt. Black boots and a large red and black cross inked into his back. Black cloak that he wears in daylight hours.
Weapons: Razor sharp sword and a series of knives.
Position: Second in command
Bio: No recollection of his family or life before his changing. He isn't trusted in the kingdom and Bronze was assigned to keep an eye on him.
(Okay Alice, I see a few things. First of all, I had prefered the second in command really be a fairy, and my goal was that Bronze and his second could kind of but heads more than be friends. I mean, they might know each other, but I imagine them more as rivals. Also, remember vampires are sensetive to the sunlight, and you haven't described any of his means of avoiding burning in it.)
(um, okay, how about the second fighter postion. And he'll wear a cloak during daylight hours.)
(Well, we need a second-in-command, so could you maybe just change him knowing Bronze to him and Bronze always having been 'friendly competition'? Like he's the local vampire everyone hates and suspects and Bronze is constantly having to keep an eye on him because everyone's worried he'll attack?)
(I can do that it, it sounds like it could lead to an interesting relationship between the two.)
(Cool, should I edit my my post or just leave it as is?)
(there, all edited. :) )
(No problem :) )
((EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath, if it is okay with you, I would like to make a second character.))
((Ah! I just found this :P May I please join, Endless? ANd if so: do you need me to fill a specific spot or gender?))
(Ahhoy and Guardian: You don't have to ask for a second character, you only have to ask if you want any beyond that. Sure. I believe we're in need of a fighter, stealth, or healer. Male. Fairy or human/mage/witch. PLEASE CALL A POSITION BEFORE MAKING YOUR CHARACTER SKELETON! Thanks)
((Okay, may I be a human/mage/witch male and a stealth? A quick question please: what exactly is the difference between a mage and a witch in this case?))
(I explained the difference in the description of that species. And the difference is basically where they get their power from and how they use it.)
((Okay, I must've read over that by mistake. So would that be okay for my person?))
(Yeah, that's fine.)
Species: Human/ mage
Name: Septimus Ryder (only close friends and family call him by his first name. Everyone else knows him by Ryder)
Appearance: He is 6 foot 2 inches and very muscular and in shape -but not so much he looks like a body builder; he just doesn't have a lot of excess fat on him. He has shaggy oak-brown hair and grey eyes that are the color or the pepples on the bottom of a riverbed. He has large and slinder hands that help him in his field of work greatly. He has a small rune by his right eye that helps him see better at night and in the dark. He wears brown pants, leather boots, a satchel, a green longsleeved shirt, and a cloak.
Weapons: He carries a small non-magical dagger for tight spots but he mostly uses his staff -which has the ablity to turn into a spear and a rope. His staff is made from a rowan tree and at the tip is a small crystal rock that carries magical properties and gives him most of his power. He also has a talisman that he wears on a leather string around his neck that helps him move even more quietly than he normally can.
Bio: He was raised by his grandparents most of his childhood after his dad left to make some more money and his mother died. It was his grandmother who taught him the ways of magic. After his grandparents died when he was 12 his father came back for him and taught him how to be a stealth. Septimus quickly learned how to become one of the best at his job and when he heard of the mission to the mysterious castle he instantly signed up to help.
((Is he okay?))