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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:32 pm

((@ For_The_Glory, We can start now. Do you want to go first or me? If you do go ahead.))
(( and @ everyone else This is a 1X1 but if others want to join I will open ad different thread and we do one there. {you too Rose99 if you still want to}. LEt me know here and I can start a new one))

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:36 pm

((Ugh! It didn't post. *sighs and retypes post* @ For_The_Glory, we can start now. And if you want to you can go ahead and start it. If you want me to start say so and I will))

((@ everyone else. This is a 1X1 with me and Glory but if you want to do this I will set up a different thread with the same plot and stuff. It will be open to everyone. If you want me to do this tell me here.))

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:39 pm

((Curses!!! Y U no let me post TI?!?!))

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:40 pm

((OKAY! What I said was For_The_GLory go ahead and start. and @ EVERYONE ELSE I will open up a new thread with the same plot so if you want to join you can jump in at that one)))

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:48 pm

((Go ahead Glory! is what I said.))

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 3:49 pm

((For everyone else I started a new thread for you to join up in if you want to do it))

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 4:10 pm

Try picked her diary up, the light was fadingin her loft and it was cold.  She opened it up her diary and satrted to write, she needed to write before it became night and too dark to see in her loft.  
 
'Nov 15, 2212
 
Tooday haznt ben ezee.  I didnt git aneethin to eet, the soop kichenz ran out ov food befor I cood git anee.   Didnt hav anee luk steelin aneethin eether.  Hopefullee Ill fiind mor food toomorrow, I wish Mawm and Dad wer heer.  Thay alwayz seemd too bee abal too hav or fiind food.  Nothin much hapen today othar than goin foodles, it's been pritty borin otherwize.'

She finished writing and closed the book.  The air was getting colder, she wrapped her arms around her chest, she didn't have a coat.
 
 
Risk hit the punching bag hard.  His fists slammed into the bag, his knuckles were bleeding slightly, but he kept punching the bag.  He'd been working on his fighting tecniques all day and was covered in sweat. His shirt was soaked and he'd taken it off and thrown in a aside.  he was waiting for Darkyn to show up, eh hadn't seen him all day.  His small chest heaved as he paused for a few moments from his exercising to stretch his fingers and hands and to get a drink of his Lemon&Lime Gatorade.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 4:26 pm

Kyvan sat hunkered down in the brush watching the soldiers supervised the slaves as they pile supplies from the Gardens into the trucks.  They were going to haul all of the hard worked food that they hadn't lifted a finger to help to the Capitol.  He felt anger boil down in his gut as he watched the soldiers slam the trucks' shut and climbed in. They roared to life and slowly began to drive down the cracked road to the highway.
Kyvan cupped his hands around his mouth and hooted.  Somewhere down the line another hoot answered him. Letting him know that they were ready for the ambush on the trucks.
 
 
 
Darkyn strolled down the halls, ignoring the servants as they bowed low to him.  He was deep in thought. Word had reached him of their food trucks being robbed and plundered.  He had to double the amount of soldiers pronto before those rats destroyed all of the food and took it for themselves.
Darkyn walked into the training room, as it was his custom to train everyday at this time. He saw Risk in the far corner.  He paused and watched him for a moment. He would make him a fine general one day if he kept his loyalties up.
"Keep your punches quicker and more controled," Darkyn said. "You look like a chicken flapping your arms."

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 4:50 pm

"Yes sir!" Risk yelled.  He hanged his punches to be ore controlled and a bit faster.  Bam! Bam! His fists slammed into the bag hard, it was a bag that hung from the ceiling it swung as he punched it.  He ended his set of punches by suddenly backing up and hitting the bag with a round-house kick.  He then went back to fight stance and started over with combinations of kicks, ppunches adn other types of strikes.
 
Try looked out the window down at the street below.  The street lights made glowing circles on the sidewalk.  Not many people were out at this time of day, or night, it was almost night.  She went to th corner of the loft and curled up on her sagging mattress and covered up with her raggedy blanket.  Try closed her eyes, maybe she could get some sleep tonigt, teh last couple of night some Creatures had run rampage in the streets and there'd been non-stop shooting.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 6:30 pm

Kyvan trailed after the trucks, being sure to hide in the shaddows. Luckily, the lights out here were merely shells and had not worked for a century.
The trucks aproached a small bridge and slowed down so that only one at a time could pass. Kyvan tensed from behind an old car shell.  This was the place.
The first truck passed with no harm. And the second began to cross when a large flash of light exploded in the sky above them. A firecracker that Yang had managed to make.
Kyvan flew into action and attacked the first truck. slicing the tires with his knife so they couldn't drive away.
 
 
 
Darkyn watched Risk for a moment before saying, "Better."
He then turned to the weights and began to lift them around. Maybe he shouls send some of those wolf Creatures with them too.

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 6:41 pm

((Is the ambush taking palce outside of Try's loft building?))
 
Risk watched Darkyn throw weight around for a few moments, then he went back to hitting the punching bag.  His knuckles were a bloody mess now.  He probably should ask Darkyn for soem of those fingerless thin gloves taht the otehr sodliers used to train.  They were pretty much just to protect the knuckles, they didn't do much else, they were padded or anything.  Maybe next time he worked on fight he could take a kitchen cloth, cut it into strips and wrap his knuckles.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 9:39 pm

((If you want it to be it can.  That'd be a good place for them to meet and then Kyvan could introduce her to the other's))
 

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 10:03 pm

Kyvan climbed up the truck and crept across the roof to the passenger window. The souldiers were shooting blindly in the darkness. They had no clue he was above them.  Kyvan reached in and grabbed the one and yanked him through the window before whacking him on the head and throwing him aside. Shouts were rising from the other trucks as the rest of Kyvan's team raided the others.
 

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 10:03 pm

Try heard what sounded like firecracker, she got up and went to tehw indow peering out.  There were firecrackers.  There were also some trucks and shadowy forms moving around in the street below.  Great just great!  Now these people will either be caught and use my building as cover which'll draw fire.  Or they'll just disturbe my sleep!!  she thought guessing some sort of ambush was going on down tehre considering some forms appeared to be slashing tires.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 10:29 pm

Kyvan was suddenly knocked down. He felt a barrel pressed to the back of his head and a soulder muttered, "I'm going to blow you away Stray."
A high pitched whistle was the only warning the soulder had before Wyvern flew down and began to go for his eyes.  The boy fell back screaming and swiping at her.
Kyvan turned and whacked him too and he slumped forward. He held his arm out and the Creature landed on it. He gently stroaked her chin. "Thanks girl. Remind me to give you a treat of that."
Wyvern chirped in reply and made bird-like purrs.
 
 
Darkyn picked up a sword and tossed another to Risk. "LEt's practice with swords. You're doing well in your other training I hear. Let's test you." 

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 10:35 pm

Risk caught the sword and got into a fighting stance, watching Darkyn.  Risk wasn't a good sword fighter, he prefered hand-to-hand weaponless fighting or guns.  He came in for the attack with a hard quick jab towards the stomach.
 
Try saw some sort of Ctreature help a young man who'd been knocked over.  Her eyes narrowed, she didn't like Creatures, they'd always scared her and been sort of freaky in her mind. She'd done her best to avoid Creatures for a while now, normal animals didn't bug her though. She glared down at the scene below, it was getting rather hectic and harder to follow, but she still watched.

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For_The_GloryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 20, 2012 at 10:37 pm

((ADD ON TO RISK'S POST:))
 
Risk was glad to hear that people thought he was doing well, he was also elated that Darkyn seemed to believe them.  HE wanted to make Darkyn so proud he would allow Risk to join the army sooner, even though he was seriously underaged.

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:32 am

((Sorry it's taken so long! TI hasn't been working with me....))
 
Kyvan jumped down from the truck and stopped. He felt the hairs on the back of his neck lift up.  Someone, some where, was watching him.  He looked up and around.
 
 
Darkyn lunged at Risk. He knew that a sword was Risk's weakness.  He had picked it for more than the reason than he was rusty, he had picked it to just remined Risk how much better he was than Risk.

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Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:40 am

Risk swung his sword wildly to block the lunge and jumped back.  A sword was such an unweeldly thing, when would he every use it in a fight?  He gripped his sword tightly and swung it up in an attack to Darkyn's neck, or shoulder more of, it was supposed to be at the neck, but Risk couldn't reach up that far and wouldn't be able to  weeld his sword properly if he tried to gp that high anyway.
 
Try saw the boy turn an dlooked in her direction, quickly she moved so that the wall as hiding her form, but she could still see out.  She breathing slowly now, she didn't want to be seen, not by the boy with the Creature.  He might force her into the army.  Her Mom and Dad had told her not to go into the army, and that even if she wanted to she'd not be good enough.  

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guardianofthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 10:57 am

"Skipper!!" Yang called, shouting Kyvan's code name of the night. 
Kyvan glared once more into the distance before looking down at Yang as he looked up at him. "What?"
"One managed to call for help before we got him.  We gotta roll if we want to get the stuff before they send the Creatures."
Kyvan nodded and lept down, he adjusted his mask. "Take what we need. What we don't push the trucks off the cliff and blow the bridge."
Yang saluted him and ran off.
 
 
Darkyn blocked Risk's blade easily and kicked him back, so hard he knocked him to the floor. He placed the tip of his sword under his chin.  "You are sloppy, Risk. Do you expect to become a soldier fighting like that?"
 

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