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Oct. 19, 2012 at 10:30 pm

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This is a 1x1, but might possibly be flexible enough to allow one or two more people if they can think of someone to be. :) Don't bother reading if you can't be dedicated and literate. In fact, you may want to read the rules before the rest to make sure you can do this because it would be annoying to read all this stuff and then realize you can't do it....
 
 
 
The world: Future, the year 5037. There are three main governments:
 
The Olais, focusing mainly on trade and craftsmanship, they hardly have a military at all, and control the resource-rich galaxy of Cousana. They are relatively peaceful, and neutral to the others.
 
The Jakien, lead by a rich and powerful man named Cliff Brouwer, they are a very controling, strong military faction, are in control of three galaxies; Davaesoul, Mana Stratos, and Vatacalas. They are at war with the third government, which is dominant, and at the moment winning. The Jakien are ruthless killers, trade in slaves, and treat their prisoners horribly.
 
And finally, the Zsrach. They'd once been the sole faction, ruling all the explored galaxies, until they broke off into separate groups, forming the Jakien and Olais as more worlds were discovered and the need to spread out became greater. Now they have six galaxies: Praze Central, Mog, and Keisharyna. At first it was all fine, but after a few hundred years, the Jakien became more and more powerful, and started the war. They try to be mostly fair, but strike back in equal measure, if more honorably. The main characters work for them.
 
 
The characters: They were a team. Inseparable, they were like extentions of each other. So close that they knew what the other was thinking, just from a look or a movement, so close that they had complete and utter trust in each other.
She was a linguistic expert, could fight off ten men at once with a sword, and hit a grape at thirty yards with a dagger. A master of disguise, no one but her counterpart could distinguish her from anything she wanted to be.
He was a hacker. Nearly any security system or console out there, he could break into it. For fighting he preferred his own body, but was almost never seen without a pistol and a long distance rifle. His skills also include explosives.
Together they formed a bond so close that nothing could tear them apart. They were the best of the best, a duo that was giving the Zsrach a definite upper hand in the war. They infiltrated and captured countless stations, outposts, and ships, and took down hundreds of the Jakien's number's in the ten years the worked together.
They met when they were in their early twenties, and became friends quickly. As the years passed, their relationship had possibly begun to be something more...
 
The story: It was a mission like any other, they were there to destroy a new weapons plant on a small planet in Mana Stratos. But someone had tipped them off, and they were ambushed. He was hurt, sliced across his right calf by a battle ax. Even wounded, he propped himself against a wall and continued to fight the soldiers off. It was in vain, and as his vision dimmed from blood loss the last thing he saw was her, running.
He was taken prisoner, held and tortured for years, being kept alive to suffer in penance of the Jakien lives he'd taken. At first he waited, sure she would come back and get him out, as he was too hurt to manage himself.
But she never did. A heartbreaking act of betrayal, he didn't even try to get out anymore once he realized she had stabbed him in the back. Broken, he endured day after day of pain and humiliation.
 
Until now, six years later, in the year 5043, she finds herself on a ship that's transporting the son of Brouwer from Davaesoul to Mana Stratos. Why she's on the ship, you get to decide. What she doesn't know is that he is on the ship, too. After he was captured, Jakien started gaining in the war.
 
 
 
The rules:
 
Dedication. I can't stress this enough. You don't have to post every day, but I really, really, want this to keep going. I want a hardcore Rper who WILL NOT DROP OUT, and maybe even stay for a sequel. Or a prequel. :)
 
Literate: And I mean literate. No one-liners, text walls, bad punctuation, etc. A typo here and there is acceptable, but please, spell your age. :)
 
This is dark: Sorry, but you can't join if you're as squishy as pudding. :p Not that there's anything wrong with that, but RPing in an RP with torture and nasty stuff would be awkward...
 
Realism: Obviously, as this is futuristic, there will be some weird stuff, but you still have to obey the laws of physics. No bullet dodging or anything like that. :)
 
Futuristic/steampunkish: Keep the technology, fashion, etc. in with the world. People aren't going to be wearing jeans and using laptops.
 
Be creative: Make up gadgets, planets, and stuff. And make it awesome XD.
 
The skellie(I feel like labeling everything right now XD):
 
Name:
 
Age: (keep it with the timeframe, no teenagers)
 
Gender: (I want the guy)
 
Home: (galaxy and planet, you can make up the planet name)
 
Appearance (before): (put what they looked like six years ago, the last time they saw each other)
 
Appearance (after):
 
Personality (before):
 
Personality (after):
 
Bio: (this is required, as they trusted each other completely and would know everything about their past)
 
Extra:
 

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Oct. 19, 2012 at 10:30 pm

((This is all kind of long. XD))
 
Name: Dukani (Kani) Revar
 
Age: 37
 
Gender: Male
 
Home: Keisharyna, on the planet Onyx
 
Appearance (before): Tall, 6'2” with a medium to large build. His hair was close-cut and dark, a charcoal black. His skin was darkly tanned, with a few scars on his forearms and one two inch scar across the right side of his head, on top, which shows through his short hair if you look closely. A squarish head shape, with a strong jaw. The words that come to mind when you see him are ruggedly handsome.
Narrow, dark, almost black green eyes with a lumbar ring. His nose was long, and a bit wide but not huge, with a slight bump on the bridge from being broken as a teen. He had a few laugh lines around his mouth, and looked happy and mischievous, but only when around people he liked, like his partner, a few other friends, and his sister. When around most people, however, his face would be serious and unreadable.
His wardrobe consisted of mostly dark clothes, sturdy but suple.
 
Appearance (after): After years of imprisonment, his appearance has changed drastically. He's gaunt from the scant meals that half the time, he doesn't even eat. His hair has grown out past his shoulders, as he has no way to cut it, and he ties it back when he thinks to with braided strands from his shirt. He has countless new scars all over his body, and his right ear is completely gone. His left eyebrow is also gone, replaced with an ugly strip of scar tissue from a burn. Half of the thumb on his right hand has been severed.
He limps on the right, from the wound he sustained when he was captured.
 
Personality (before): Intense, and fast-paced, he was a bit stop-and-go. One minute he'd be fighting furiously, the next he'd be leaning casually against a wall. He was a quick thinker, making on the spot decisions and acting on them. He always believed in instinct, and his was rarely wrong. He only truly relaxed around people he knew well, even if he looked completely calm.
Mechanically minded, he flew their ship and made many of the repairs when needed, and was always modifying weapons and such, and making explosives. Though hardly anyone knew it, he was artistic, and loved more than almost anything else the feel on a stick of charcoal in his hand and paper in his lap.
He loved to mess with his partner, teasing her all the time, even around other people, though he did it so subtly no one but her could tell. He had a way with dogs, and owned a doberman that stayed at his little sister's guest house while he was working.
 
Personality (after): He hardly talks anymore, and when he does it's rude and scathing. Though broken from the betrayal, he still has fight, and insults his captors constantly, and does everything in his power to vex them, causing them to put a ParalyzerClip on his neck frequently just to get him to shut up.He's full of hate, and the old him is gone...Or at least hidden.
 
Bio: He grew up with his parents, mainly raised by his father as his mother was ill most of the time. Even with such advanced medical knowledge, and the rarity of disease, no one could heal her or even correctly diagnose the illness, and she died when he was fourteen. His father went to fight in the war a year after to provide for his children and help the cause, leaving fifteen year old Dukani to care for his seven year old sister, Niani, but was wounded after only eighteen months of fighting, and had to return home. Setting out to finish what his father started, and now having to provide for the family, Kani joined the army at seventeen.
Niani married a man named Hunter when she was nineteen, and Dukani and his partner crashed in her guest house often, as they worked so much the usually didn't need places of their own. He has two nieces and a nephew, Anika, Tal, and Varian.
He met his partner when he was twenty-one.
 
Extra: He is ambidextrous.

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 10:51 pm

I'll do this with you but I haven't ever done a futuristic role-play before so I am slightly confused but I think I can figure it out. I'm very dedicated but if I am busy I sometimes post a one liner. I will TRY beyond trying to avoid it though. I don't think I have ever done an Rp with you so you may not want to do this with me.

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Oct. 19, 2012 at 10:57 pm

((Yay! I think we might have been in one that died once....Were you in that one with the werewolves in the forest?
 
If you're confused, feel free to ask questions. :) ))

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:02 pm

(I figured it out I just had to read it again :) and no I never was :P So do you want me to post my skellie? Ian does it have to be as long as yours? It will be descriptive but I don't know if it will be that huge.)

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Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:06 pm

((Yes, go ahead and post. :) It doesn't have to be that huge, I just get carried away sometimes....
 
I keep feeling like we were in an RP togetheer briefly...))

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Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:14 pm

((HA! It was Miss Hatkin's reform school.))

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:47 pm

Name: Andryah (Andy) Kylynn Lunae
 
Age: 35
  
Gender: Female
  
Home: Mog, planet Tirann 
  
Appearance (before): Andy had pale skin that was bright and clear. Her build was light and willowy, making her look delicate. You shouldn't have let that fool you though. Hidden behind the delicate exterior was lean and very powerful muscles. They gave her a lithe, almost cat-like grace to her movements. Andy's eyes were deep amber and flecked with burning gold. They were framed by long, dark, curly lashes. Andy's face was sleek and cat-like, matching they way she held herself her eyes and lips, however, were large and full which balanced out the high cheekbones and straight nose. Her hair was a rich chocolate brown and fell in loose waves to the bottom of her ribcage, framing her heart-shaped face. She had a belly ring. She has scars across her back, thighs and the back of her neck.
  
Appearance (after):  She looks basically the same but has a few tattoos. One of a phoenix on her shoulder, one of a heart on her hip over Dukani's name and a star on each wrist. 
  
Personality (before): Sweet but she will kick your butt if you need it. Andy has always been a tomboy and was always more willing to throw down in a fist fight then be a catty bit.ch and spread rumors. Andy will tell you straight up when you are wrong. Andryah tends to bottle up emotions, hiding them from everyone. Only Kani could decode her.
  
Personality (after): She has a smilier personality now but she is much more quiet. She misses Kani desperately even though she hides it. Andy is suffering from severe depression, something she also hides.
  
Bio: Her father was abusive for her entire childhood. She had an older brother named Kanuna and a mother name Alexiah. Her father murdered her mother in front of her and her brother. Soon after Kanuna died when he went to far in a beating. Andy surveyed though and her father was put into jail. Andy met Kani when she was 19
  
Extra: Nope

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:49 pm

(Oh! I totally forgot about that!)

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Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:56 pm

((Me too, I had to google our screennames together to find it.
 
Great charrie!))
 
 
 
It was dark. Still. Dukani had been sitting in this room ever since the ship took off three hours ago, in the dark, alone. Of course, he prefered to be alone.
    His head rested against the wall and he could feel the hum of the ship through the floor. He hadn't budged since he was put in here, and his muscles were cramping.

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:04 am

(Wait. I haz a question. Ok so who is this prince dude. I looked through the info and I couldn't figure that out.)

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:07 am

((He isn't a prince exactly. He is the son of the Jakien leader. This is his ship, and he's traveling, taking Dukani with him. :) ))

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:17 am

Andy watched her target, expertly hidden in the crowd of his bodyguards. She had to get him. Had to make Cliff pay for what he took from her. She figured that Kani was dead now. She hated the Jakein for that. She hated them more then ever. Andy watched her target, forcing back the hate. She had run to call for reinforcement and when she returned Kani was gone.The agency hadn't let her return to save him and now they were letting her get back at them.

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:27 am

As hard as he fought it, exsaustion finally took over and Dukani drifted of into sleep. His dreams were the same as they usually were.
    He was on his knees, hands chained behind him. In front of him stood Andy. She smirked at him and opened her mouth to say something, but he couldn't hear it.
    Suddenly, she was gone, replaced by Niani, her eyes open in confusion. He shook his head. They couldn't have gotten her, too. Looking around the room, he saw Andy again, this time leaving the room.
    There was a snap and his head whirled back to his sister in time to see her fall, neck broken.
 
  Jerking awake, Kani stood up, away from the wall. His heart was pounding.

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:33 am

Andy drew her sword. She'd need backup. Anger fluttered over her features. Her right hand had been killed. She still needed backup. Andryah slunk toward the prison rooms. Some broke her heart. Little girls in chains, mothers clutching desperately to their children. How had they even ended up here? She found a room, too dark to see inside of.

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:40 am

Dukani froze, seeing someone move outside his door. The window was very small, and he'd only seen her for a second, but it had looked like...
   No. He turned away, running a hand through his unkempt hair. It was just the dream, making him see things. It probably hadn't even been a woman, as the Jakien didn't approve of female warriors. He was just seeing things.

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:45 am

Andy could tell it was a guy inside. The cell was high security and she knew she would have to think like Kani. "Ok..." she whispered to herself "Think like Dukani." she whispered. After much thought she managed to get through, unlocking the door. She pushed it open and looked though the darkness, trying to distill the human from the shadows.

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:52 am

Hearing the door open Kani whirled around. It couldn't be. It had to be a trick. If it was, it was a perfect trick. Even the way she stood was the same.
    Speechless, he just stood and stared, not breathing. As he came to his senses, a wave of rage went through him. She'd left him to die. Maybe she'd even been the one who'd tipped them off. He didn't know what to believe anymore.
    In an instant he was across the room. Grabbing her, he pulled her in and slamemd her against the wall, pinning her there. A thousand words went through his head, accusations, threats, everything, but all he could say was her name. "Andryah," he whispered, before realizing she might not even recognize him. It was dark, he looked different, and even sounded different.

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Oct. 20, 2012 at 12:52 am

Hearing the door open Kani whirled around. It couldn't be. It had to be a trick. If it was, it was a perfect trick. Even the way she stood was the same.
    Speechless, he just stood and stared, not breathing. As he came to his senses, a wave of rage went through him. She'd left him to die. Maybe she'd even been the one who'd tipped them off. He didn't know what to believe anymore.
    In an instant he was across the room. Grabbing her, he pulled her in and slamemd her against the wall, pinning her there. A thousand words went through his head, accusations, threats, everything, but all he could say was her name. "Andryah," he whispered, before realizing she might not even recognize him. It was dark, he looked different, and even sounded different.

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DeadlyPurpleBunny replied...
Oct. 20, 2012 at 1:03 am

She gasped, strangely colored eyes widening. She could feel the recognition. In the way he moved, the way he said her name. Kani was utterly different yet tantalizingly similar. Andy shook her head, forcing back tears. She could tell he blamed her "Oh my god..." there was a half sob in her voice. "They wouldn't let me come... I tried... They wouldn't let me." she whispered. 

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